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Reviews for Shades of Mystification

By : Hellagoddess
  • From RiamtheWanderer on June 24, 2008
    Great to see a new chapter. This one was very sweet, it's nice to see them back on track. Keep it up!
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  • From Duomi on June 24, 2008
    Ah!!! Raito tripping when he gets out of the shower is great! Poor pissed off!Raito. He did deservet that though. So what if his boyfriend's an obsessive voyeur with cameras everywhere and no moral center? *grins*

    I love that he can't take off the ring, keeps stopping himself. That makes me overly pleased.

    *giggles more* Omg, Misa chasing Raito into the street, and and, Matsuda and Misa as Raito's parents is such a terrifying thought! Weirdest AU idea ever, that'd be. Ohmy. Also! Raito should really have assumed L would show up.

    '“As I stated just now. I came to see you off. Raito-kun is…leaving the country and I…I…” He stumbled on his words and fell silent, his breath unsteady. L was looking away and Raito stared, equally entranced and horrified as the artist swallowed hard and squeezed his eyes shut, hands gripping his knees."

    Upon reading that, I'll let you know my face crumbled and the only thought in my brain was, "Awwwww...!" followed by, "Poor L...!" Made me sniffle a bit, too.

    Also, I love that Raito in this has grown up enough to be sickened by doing that to L, and not go power-happy and smirky, like he would in his bastard!Kira stage. I love how this Raito has evolved, and yet stays true to Raito. It always impresses me...!

    Yay! Raito was watching Battle Royale. That gave me a giggling fit... Raito watching his own actor! Was that a throw-back to Tear You Apart with Misa watching it, or is that my ego? x.X Either way, the idea of that cracks me up.

    As for your AN: The first part didn't seem wishy-washy at all! In fact, I'd found myself nodding agreement with a wry smile at how Raito was acting, since putting off uncomfortable things until I "have time to think" is something I nearly always do, and usually, I end up realizing much later that the decision had been made but I'd been a coward or whatever and avoiding it. So that seemed perfectly reasonable to me!

    It's also a bad way to do things. Shame on Raito! It's so his char to make L be the one to bend and talk to him and not realize he'd have hurt L too until he saw it. So, so him. They're both so childish! I love them.

    But yes, this is becoming an epic review, so. Loved it, as always, and I bow to your talent!
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  • From goddess8878 on June 23, 2008
    Another wonderful chapter. But, wow...Battle Royale on the plane? As much as I like that film, I don't think I'd want to watch it while being stuck on a plane with a bunch of strangers XD.
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  • From Kuragari75 on June 23, 2008
    lol, love the hearts made out of fruit. That's just too cute. I had a feeling it was L as soon as it was a black car. ^^ hope those two make up real well soon. Loving it!
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  • From Tulip32 on June 23, 2008
    I really liked this chapter because you were able to accurately illustrate the conflicting feelings between Raito and L, and what the two are going through at this particular moment. They both love each other and yet again, L makes the first move.

    So, what's this trip again? I wouldn't have been surprised if L followed him to wherever Raito was going. I can't wait for the next chapter and remember YOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR! So no depreciating.
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  • From ninetailedfoxx852 on June 23, 2008
    aww i really liked this chapter!! especially the part where watari caught them making out in the back seat lmao cant wait to what your brilliant mind come up with for the next chapter!! XD
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  • From Dotowe on June 23, 2008
    I'm grateful nonetheless. Thank you for the update! Um, are you alright? I hope you, your mother, and your grandmother are feeling better. Again, thank you so much for the update!

    Joie,
    Gloria
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  • From InkHeart17 on June 17, 2008
    I really liked the way you alliviated some of the tension I was feeling with L interpreting the "bastard" remark as he did, and the way he looked when deserting the tea.
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  • From Tulip32 on June 17, 2008
    Don't belittle yourself.

    Anyway this chapter was amazing because it explained so much about L that previously hidden to the reader and Raito, even though we knew, in a way, what was happening. Well, actually it just explained that he's a huge pervert and very stalkerish. I felt the most sympathy for Raito because now he feels as though L doesn't love him the way he loves the other man, or maybe that there were ulterior motives behind the other's actions. Poor Raito.

    I hope you feel better. *gives you some medicine* I'm glad to hear that your grandmother is feeling better as well.
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  • From Duomi on June 16, 2008
    Don't think it's a sub-standard chapter! I like that Raito got all pissed off but still stuck to keeping the ring. Also, the idea of Raito being able to tell L had been upset by him eating the inferior lollipop was both cute and clever.

    And... Mysterious Room of Mystery has been revealed!!! I was really thinking 'kinky bondage room' with some of L's paintings, but 'secrety spy room' does suit him better! I'm guessing Raito won't immediately bounce back from this in a happy-bunnies way. Looking forward to more!

    Also, I'm glad your grandma's doing better, but it passing to you and your mother is very, very bad. Get better! Take care!
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  • From ANON - may on June 16, 2008
    just so you know red and white roses together signifie death
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  • From PlantangelJchan on June 16, 2008
    Aww I'm glad everything is going well. Yeah that kidney disease thing is running rampant now. I have a physical scheduled to determine that exact thing this week and I'm not looking forward to it. But this was still a good chapter despite your sub-standard label. Oh and thanks for the gaia comment glad you liked my profile. Let me know if you're on towns any time you see me online and we'll hang. Well see ya next chapter and I'm thinking of doing some avvie art for your fic so look forward to that too. Keep it up loving it.

    -L
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  • From ANON - Fufa Anderson on June 13, 2008
    Oh wow. I just read all 19 chapters within 24 hours. And I worked and stuff. c:

    Very good. I lurv it. Hope your grandma gets better.
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  • From ANON - Pi on June 10, 2008
    I'm new to this story and loving it. I spent half of this chapter laughing and/or giggling in my room. L's calculation of him posing going down was too funny to me for some reason. Just HAD to say it, didn't you? Thanks for working so hard on this, I really don't see too many DN fics that really make me chuckle out loud.
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  • From ANON - Shishio on June 10, 2008
    ^_^ Awww, the ending of chapter 19 and 18 made me fuzzy inside. Perfect WAFF. I have no clue what a car boot is but I figurd it was something that you put in your car to keep things safe, right..? I loved the scene when L was chasing the ducks, and it was kind of funny how Mikami quoted Shakespear while kidnapping Light.

    Um, about your grandmother's sugar level. If she eats something salty it should go down, like Saltine Crackers. If that's not working then I suggest you get some Chloroform for yourself, knock her out, and take her to the hospital because then you have a major problem on your hands. -I would have suggested knocking her out with force, but I figured since she was your grandmother you would rather not have to use such force...-
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