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Reviews for Break Through

By : Tairyn
  • From ANON - Ryuichi_loves_Jess on July 10, 2006
    AHHHHHHH THAT WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Keyle on July 07, 2006
    Great plot twists and effort. ^^ Thank you so much for another wonderful chapter.

    ... WE WANT TOHMA SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Oh, pretty, pretty please witha marachino on top?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2006
    I love your story. My pole for the sex scene is i want pages of detail. I like the way that you write, so do not imply the sex that would be to much torcher.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on June 29, 2006
    The Poll: Full blown details
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  • From ANON - DD on June 29, 2006
    Personally I think your sex scenes are fucking hot, scuse the language. Anyway loved this latest chapter. I've hated Mikka from day one and glad she got what she deserved, hope she gets another smack down. Anyway, cannot wait for the next chapter, really hope it's soon. YOU ROCK.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on June 29, 2006
    I'm confused. This story has 2 additional chapters in the fanfiction.net site. I to feel "angst" should be stretched out like a rubber band.
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  • From ANON - Honesty on June 28, 2006
    You want reviews? Be carful what you wish for. Your grammer is appalling, the story looks and sounds like it was written by a child, and it drags HORRIBLY. The first chapter made my skin crawl when you made Hiro into a kiddie goth wanna-be and you had him and Shuichi obsessing over Naruto in the school hallways like American fangirls. I can not BELIEVE you've written 24 chapters and Shuichi and Yuki are still not together. In the Gravitation manga and anime they'd already fucked at volume/episode 2! Your sex scene was decent, I'll give you that, but the rest of this story is sheer crap.
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  • From ANON - kagomegirl on January 06, 2006
    wow you know i never did like hiro and tohuma pairings but in this fic you made it alright and i liked it. poor shu-chan and yuki is just waay too dense. i cant wait for more update again soon!!!
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  • From ANON - wanderingaddict on January 05, 2006
    Huzzah! Huzzah!! You finally updated. On the other hand though, I am getting kinda tired of Yuki never getting his comeuppance. Seriously. The whole series he's been a complete jerk/fucktard and is always happy compared to the mountain of misery that Shuichi is in. That's my one beef, really, that he took Shuichi's verginity, treated him like dirt, then it sounds like Shuichi is going to have to do all the work of getting them back together. I really really hope that he gets hit by a bus soon...
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  • From ANON - purplekitty on January 04, 2006
    Have I told you that you are a genius! Sure the update took a long time coming but it was truly worth it. Reading this is like reading a novel I love it. I usually don't like angst but your story is one of my favorites. I also like the twist you did with Tatsuha and Ryuichi although I do feel bad for Suguru. Do you plan on paring him with someone? Is Mika going to seriously hurt Hiro? Will Yuki really marry Mikka? Will Yuki realize just how wrong he was about Shuichi? Will Gackt ever marry me? So many questions so many choices it's so exciting! Did I forget to mention how I liked the way you did that alternative hot spring story? It was really cool.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on January 04, 2006
    I have just finished reading your fanfic and i loved it, i cant wait for more, i really hope Yuki and Shu get together soon. Pleeeeeeeeeassssssssssssse write more soon.
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  • From ANON - eppy on January 04, 2006
    omg yea you updated and it was even worth waiting for!!!! Story is really good i can't wait for more!! WAHHHHi want
    Yuki and shu-chan 2gether already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - C4NDYP4NTS on January 03, 2006
    Hurry up and update!!! I mean, people are dying of suspense here. When will things stop going horribly wrong for everyone?
    (Good job on the story so far)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2006
    Hm, "Sleeping Beauty"? You sure that isn't supposed to be "Sleepless Beauty"?
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  • From ANON - monica on January 03, 2006
    please.
    not

    another 3 months.

    or 2 months.

    aaah

    I seriously can't last that long.

    you don't even know. I m like obsessed.. not that its a porblem. but chyea.

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