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By : Tairyn
  • From ANON - monica on January 03, 2006
    ... yes, i am crying.. bawling even. just update soon.
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  • From ANON - Hedeki on November 02, 2005
    No,...you are not boring he at all, and besides...i would like to hear more about Yuki and Shuichi. I would just want them to get together again and all because the suspense is killing me. You should keep on going and besides,...you are not running out of song titles. Here is a list of song titles from Gravitation that you haven't used yet;
    Lost Complex
    Liquid Brain
    Rain
    Hypnotic Distortion
    Time in my Heart
    Angel Dust
    Love Stuff
    Blood
    No! Virtual
    Fake Star
    Recollection
    First Demention
    Easy Action
    Power Cave

    See...there is a good 14 or 15 chapters right there.
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on October 09, 2005
    yay, i finally had time to catch up since i read it last!! (it's been MONTHS) woot, things are getting crazy dude! freakin love hexagons goin on or somethin lol...it's awesome, i like ^__^ i hope shu and yuki come to their senses soon though... esp cuz mikka's hella annoying! aiyaa!! as for what to do about the next chapter, i vote for the longer one, as long as there's more to it than just the hot springs trip... i'm definitely one for long stories with looong chapters ^__~ hope you update soon, regardless of your decision!
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  • From Ashcat on October 03, 2005
    Chpt 21: Wow.. this has been an amazing story (I spent 3 hours rereading before reading the next chapter to remember all of the intrigue!). Poor shu this is his section but he never gets any Yuki! I *love* the masturbation scenes.. very cool and almost never done and when done not nearly as well written as those! I am not sure what the say about the hot springs.. if Shu is going to show up somehow so he and Yuki can have some type of meeting at the Hot Springs then go for 40 pages.. otherwise 20 pages if its just Mikka.. btw i love how you make Yuki screwing Mikka such a chore - I think thats very realistically written!.. Please update soon!
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  • From ThePhantomSockPuppet on October 02, 2005
    As of now I've only gotten halfway through, but I've got to tell you, this is the best Gravi fic ever. EVER .

    And I've read a lot of them so I should know.

    I usually hate origional characters, but yours are so great! I can see now why you put in Mikka Costa as Eiri's fiance instead of Ayaka. Ayaka is a girl with a crush and Mikka is a woman in love with a fiance who doesn't desire her, which makes it all the more tragic. She's my favorite orgional character out of any orgional characters I have ever read about. I suppose its because I sypathize with her deeply; My situation is somewhat the same as hers.
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  • From ANON - clari chan on September 30, 2005
    jaja. oh wow...esp..thats funny. But for a moment i thought that Yuki was having a dream of Shuichi exactly how he was in the bathroom masturbating. I was like whoa..how can he see that..until you mentioned that he was on a bed and i was like ohhh. I can't wait for a real interaction between Yuki and Shuichi though. Doesn't necessarily have to be the tasty and mouth watering smut but at least some speech or face to face interaction. Please continue :D
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  • From ANON - Reader on September 30, 2005
    Oh come on! It is lovely, but I can't wait to see Yuki and Shu together (for real) again ;)
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  • From ANON - KitsuneFun on September 29, 2005
    Yes do both, I cant wait to read them since I like this story and am eagerly awaiting when Shuichi and Yuki get back together
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  • From ANON - Maplecherry on September 29, 2005
    ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... that's a hard one. But, I'm gonna have to choose B.

    This story is so incredibly good! Can you at hint the ending? [hehehe... wait... don't tell me the ending, I wanna read on and see.]

    Please update soon.

    Love,

    Maplecherry


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  • From Ashcat on September 19, 2005
    Wow.. I don't know where to begin! This fic is AMAZING! You are such a GREAT writer! I do have to admit that I am reading this really for ShuxYuki and I want them to get back together damnit NOW.. your just torturing the poor boys! I think your Ryu is very scary.. I love it! He is after what he wants.. the thing about "yes I want to have sex with you very badly" was the *BEST* that is HILLARIOUS! I can not WAIT for the next few chapters so that SxY get back together! Argh.. that has to be some really hot sex after all of this angst! I just love how you had Shu save himself for yuki and now be all angsty and disollusioned.. just don't let Ryu get to him first! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kiriou on September 15, 2005
    I just love your story! I love absolutely everything about it!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on September 14, 2005
    It's not that I'm bored or anything, it's really good and I enjoy reading it, I just usually happen to read late at night, which just happens to be my only free time most of the time, and I get too tired to even think straight let alone review, so don't take it personally. Yes, I'm going to ask for Yuki/Shu action, which will hopefully come in the upcoming chapter seeing as you said 'triple the lemon'. And all I can think of, that is if you don't do repeats is of course Ryu/Tat and Hiro/Tohma then of course the infamous Yuki/Shu^__~ Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 13, 2005
    To answer your question, I, for one, am not getting bored of the story. Though I have to say I'm getting tired of it. There's a lof of plot there and a LOT of pairings, but in the beginning you started this as a Yuki/Shuichi fic and that's what people are expecting.

    All the other stories revolving around the support pairings would be perfect as side stories or fillers but when there's too much of it and not enough of the declared "main pairing" (which in this case it would be Yuki/Shuichi) it seems as if you're just drawing it out without a good reason. It's very tiring to read about Suguru's problem with Tatsuha for most of the chapter when you're just ACHING to know when Yuki and Shuichi will finally deal with it all.

    If you're writing this as just a standard "fifty plus chapters soap opera" fic then I feel extremely dissapointed. This has SO MUCH potential, it's insane. You write well and you characterize like magic, your descriptions are also in the pro category. Some people would kill just to be able to write emotions this well. The only problem I can see is your focus...
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  • From ANON - Dhampir on September 12, 2005
    I'm not getting bored, promise. Though it does seem to be true that people review less with each chapter...

    Anyway, I did like this chapter, I like the clues and the different relationships and such going on through this story and I'm a slow mover, I like building up to the relationship--as if it were real life almost. So I like how you write this and the pace you have it at, so please don't change it.

    Until the next chapter,

    --Dhampir

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  • From ANON - xunxin on September 11, 2005
    no i love it
    keep going at your own pace
    that just makes it better in the end
    i just get the creeps whenever i read of ryu being near shu
    y? because he creeps me out
    yuki was gonna kill himself back then?
    wow didnt even guess
    o poor shu what a complicated life so far.
    update soon.
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