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Reviews for Patience vs. Persistence

By : onlyindreams
  • From Kerstin on October 18, 2010
    Strange. I read only two chapters ... well more was not available ... however ... I really do like it and have to agree that your sudden stop of telling is cruel. It made me think and agree in more than one way with you.
    I like the style you're telling this story it's ... hm how to say ... it sounds mature and soft, sensible and senitive.
    What I like the most I think is the fact that you don't rush in your story-telling because it doesn't matter if this is fanfiction or not but a story needs a plot and not just sex ... at least that is what I think and yours has one even if not shown fully by now.
    I can only hope that you update this some day.
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  • From OokamiJudge on July 21, 2008
    I hope you haven't dropped his story it looks like it will be a very good one and it already has a good start. I hope you continue it at some time.
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  • From MasterofPie on November 28, 2007
    oh that was so sweet and so sad at the same time
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  • From Hestia on February 18, 2007
    Hi--I'd like to read the rest some day. This was a really good start. If you have an email list for updates, please put me on it. Thanks for posting!
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  • From ANON - Dassion on November 25, 2006
    Your story is awsome. I hope you plan on writing more. It would really bite for you to end it there,even though you haven't updated in a while.
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  • From ANON - CiraArana on October 11, 2006
    You do plan on continuing this, right? Right? Becaue if you don't ... argh. This is such a wonderful story! And well-written, too, which is so rare in fanfiction. The characters are very well-drawn and so much like in the manga/anime. Plus, it's an interesting, alluring plot you've going here. It would be a crime to abandon it. So, please, please do continue, and soon. I'd love to read more, and I'm so curious about what is in the package!!
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  • From ANON - ^-^ :) on August 23, 2006
    Wow... you are so crule to the people that read your stories. What's in the box? Will they get together? You're going to kill me this way. PLZ update soon I would hate to see this story go unfinshed.
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  • From ANON - broken wings on August 19, 2006
    ok, that is just cruel, leaving me hanging like that. *pouts* You have to update soon, or I swear I will never forgive you!
    Broken Wings
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  • From ANON - Sarah on July 27, 2006
    =0 *waves arms about* z0mg! T__T

    >.< Poor Ritsuka!!! ;-; Good cliff-hanger

    xD good thing theres a second chapter up! *scurries off to read it*


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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on July 23, 2006
    *pain pain* ne, ne, it hurts. *sobs*. Ah, that chapter was really angsty. Please update soon~ I want to see Ristuka-kun happy =]
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  • From ANON - Aziza Khepri on July 17, 2006
    this is an awesome ff, and you are evil for ending it there, yet genus, because it makes the reader stop and whine for more. so lol i cant wait till you update, i love Loveless, it's in the top five of my faveortie anime. Cant wait until you update!!!
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  • From ANON - gingitsune on June 19, 2006
    You ARE going to update, aren't you? I really hope you do, your story is addicting. I really want to read more. That's one of the few stories where Soubi ACTUALLY turns Ritsuka down and sticks with it...so far anyways. Please, please update!!
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  • From RabidCreature on June 09, 2006
    okay, so i read this when aff.net was still in the archive only state and i've been WAITING to review! this story is so KICK ASS! i mean........ oh my god, so freakin good! i really, really, REALLY can't wait till the next chapter! update soon! i'm dying!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - kimper on February 02, 2006
    wow. nicely done! i can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - iie on January 03, 2006
    uwaaaah!!! I feel so sad for Ritsuka! Poor boy, so needy, but denied. Not to mention insecure. To feel unwanted and undesirable, especially for Ritsuka, it must be very painful. I'm really curious as to how you're going to solve this problem. Will Soubi give in? He obviously didn't waver at all when faced with a very "ready" Ritsuka. Will he use some kind of spell? I want to know! Your story is very interesting, and I think you're doing a great job, especially without a Beta. I hope you will post soon! Good Luck!

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