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By : redqueen
  • From ANON - Azure and Onyx on January 18, 2006
    Oh wow! This is brilliant. It flows so nicely and I can't wait to see what happens next. And Schu! I love Schu. *cuddles Schu* You've written him perfectly. He's so much better when he's helping Weiss. I must say, though, I'm kind of glad Ken is out of the picture for now. I don't have anything against him, but Aya is just so much better with Yohji. (and/or Schuldig) Anyway, keep writing. I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Eboni on January 18, 2006
    The Eye of Sauron and Farfarello's eye. Hrm... I dunno, I think maybe Farfie could take that as a compliment. I mean, Sauron's famous as hell, lol.

    A little sad we didn't get to spend more time and Tokyo with Nagi but the little summary of events was nice. Nagi had everybody but Yohji, huh? Impressive. Yohji's reaction: OO. Hehehe.

    Chef Farfie...I dunno if I could have eaten there. I'd start thinking of diced kitties mixed around in my salad. I like how he kept referring to Aya and Yohji as cats. Cute!

    Take care. Great chapter!

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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on January 17, 2006
    I really think that it's sweet and touching that Aya finally admitted his love to Ken before he was taken away. I love your Farf! Wanna see more of him.
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  • From Blythe on January 17, 2006
    You know what I love about this story? I have no idea where it's going, what's going to happen next, and where it'll all end. And I think that's fabulous. So, this isn't so much a review as a "thank you." For being talented, for sharing this with us, and for not being predictable. I wait, as always, with bated breath for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - paranoidcharlotte on January 17, 2006
    WHOOT! It's about time you got Farfie in there I love Farfie! Oh poor Ken are you going to end upp being nice to him in the end or will he suffer even more?
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  • From ANON - MikaSamu on January 15, 2006
    Simply fantastic! I loved Aya's rescue of Yohji, and Schuldig's comment later about Aya's state of mind when doing so. Schuldig's growing protectiveness, and dare I hope, affection for Aya is wondeful. Members of my family suffer from depression, and I greatly appreciate the accuracy of your portrayl. It is the sparks of interest and action Aya takes in the midst of that suffocating grayness of depression that give me hope. Poor Ken, a frightening but true to what we saw in Gluhen portrait. Nice touch with Aya's farewell to Ken, and peaceful coming to turns between Schuldig and Mamarou. Now a visit to Farfello, hmmmm. I eagerly await more.
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  • From ANON - Eboni on January 15, 2006
    Alright...so Mamarou's not such a jerk anymore. He really would have killed Ken. He's someone you don't want to cross. He does what needs to be done and handles everything like its business, regardless if it deals with friends. I like that Aya would have killed Ken, but only if he HAD to and that he stopped Mamarou and Schu made Yohji aware of that very fact. Schu and Nagi being late because they were talking was funny. Wonder what they were talking about since I can't see Nagi as much of a talker. And seeing a sane version of Farfarello will be interesting. Love Crawford being as interesting as organizing a sock drawer full of white socks and how is seeing Farfarello going to help someone's mental health. Now I wonder if Yohji or Aya will feel some resentment toward Farfarello being that he was the one that caused the injury that resulted in Ken going nuts and he himself has reformed and recovered his sanity. Always looking forward to the next chapter.

    Ebs
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  • From ANON - Princess Sin on January 15, 2006
    wow poor ken has gone totally insane. who would have thought ken
    is the one crazy while farfarello is sane and going to school. but i
    still love it. i'm dying for the next chapter. hey, where is farfarello?
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  • From ANON - Jukebox on January 15, 2006
    Alright! They're taking Aya with them! I'm hoping there will be some Schu/Yohji/Aya love before it's all over. Looking forward to the next chap.
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on January 14, 2006
    So Schu and Yohji are going to take care of Aya now.....I wonder if this could progress into a threesome....*grins* Yes, I do pity Ken for the man that he has become......Meeting Farf would be interesting.
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  • From Blythe on January 14, 2006
    Farf, Farf, Farf! I'm so excited for the next chapter! Yea for Aya, Yohji, and Schu having a better understanding of one another. The interactions are wonderfully presented. I really enjoy your use of language and vocabulary. I'm really starting to appreciate stories that don't make me hate Schu. Thanks for your contribution to the end. *hugs*
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  • From ANON - MikaSamu on January 11, 2006
    How I love this story! Each element is perfect -- from Schu's anger, at least a bit on Aya's behalf; Aya's throw of the armchair to break up the fight and calm, rational, knowing participation in the discussion; the hints of the old Weiss camraderie; even the cliffhanger ending. Each piece fits together wonderfully. I admit to hoping for an eventual Aya/Yohji/Schuldig threesome -- but there are still so many terrific ways this story can go. I have trust and confidence that whichever direction you have planned will be right.
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  • From ANON - Eboni on January 10, 2006
    Finally something good to read lol. I come and check to see if there's more to this story. It just keeps getting better. Mamarou is getting on my nerves. So he expected Yohji to just drop Schuldig and go back to Aya...and I bet he was reassured by Yohji's initial reaction to Aya. Gosh, what a jerk. I wonder if Nagi knew about Mamarou's little fantasy. And if he did or didn't, how he felt or would feel about it. He seems to care about his Schuldig. The mother he never wanted indeed lol.

    Aya wanting Ken to kill him. That was heavy and true. Abusers usually don't stop until the abusee removes themselves fromt he situation or they kill them. Hmm...I wonder is Ken-Ken knows about Mamrou's little plan, hah! And will Yohji be able to control his temper, we'll see. I don't know; I think once he sees how... unstable (Aya's description was perfect) Ken is, he'll simmer down.. a bit. I can't wait to see Nagi and Schi interaction. And I wonder...Mamarou seems to like Schuldig but seems to warm whenever Nagi talks about him...making me wonder what makes these two hate each other so much. I mean the Ouka thing.. Schu wasn't the one that killed her, true he was playing mean games with them, but still... And it wasn't like the rest of Schwartz wasn't involved and he seems to accept the rest of them, sans Frafarello for obvious reason **cough** crazy**cough** So, I wonder if there's something else. Was I really picking up some kind of jealousy?

    I'm so curious, and I sound so intelligent, because I'm sure I've said I was curious before lol, but I AM! More and soon **sniff sniff** or I'll cry. Lol, thanks for the update
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  • From ANON - ycpss on January 09, 2006
    don't leave us hanging!!! have pity on us, please post the next chap ASAP!!!! love this fic ^___^
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  • From Blythe on January 08, 2006
    Oh, wow. I can't really say I'd be sorry to see some physical violence perpetrated on Ken in the next chapter! Nevertheless, regardless of the any turn the story takes, I will not be able to stop reading. Such wonderful writing certainly deserves my undivided attention. You handled the tension between Omi and Schu excetionally well, the swell of emotion for the reader eased by the brief, but bright spots of comedy ("like he was speaking some moon language", "you should be able to worship me forever without the aid of alcohol", brilliant!) Well done and, as always, I'm waiting with bated breath for more!
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