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Reviews for The Sous-Chef

By : redqueen
  • From Blythe on December 08, 2005
    Wow! I'm sorry I took so long to read chapter 3, but it was amazing! Steamy, heart-breaking, and redeeming! Beautifully written. I'm so looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Jb on December 07, 2005
    Ah I tried to leave a review..yesterday I think and AFF was having problems. I think you had more reviews than there are now too. Anyways, wanted to say this is very enjoyable so far! It's well written and some scenes are quite juicy (the body paint scene...*chuckles*...and first time with Aya was hot!). I hope this becomes a threesome of Schu/Yohji/Aya. And I definitely hope Aya-chan gets a little lesson in the pitfalls of brattiness. She needs to feel guilty and learn to appreciate everything that's been done for/given to/sacrificed for her. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - krimson on December 07, 2005
    Man, what a great story!!! To think I almost overlooked it because the title didn't interest me. What a treat I would have missed. I am really looking forward to the continuation of this story, and thanks so much for sharing it with us.
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  • From Blythe on December 07, 2005
    Yea! So glad you re-posted! So, this isn't going to be nearly as nice as the original review, mostly because I can't remember all of what I said, but I'll try. I think this is a wonderful story. Your writing is strong and vivid, really drawing the reader into your world. Your intensity is perfect for these characters and their situations and the smattering of humor is a welcome reprieve, keeping the reader from emotional overload. I'm so looking forward to future chapters!
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  • From ANON - Talyssa on December 07, 2005
    I wasn't sure how i felt about this story up to this point, i just wanted to read more and see how i felt. I just finished chapter 3 and i've decided i love it. More please! Once the relationships started developing out and the characters got fleshier -- well, its just shaping up in a very lovely way.
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