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Reviews for Ragnarok

By : puffball64
  • From ANON - Anonymous on August 08, 2013
    You can write as much as you want, Garnet. But you can't write for shit if you can't even spell a single "Yeah" correctly. It's not fucking "ya", it's not fucking "yea", and it DEFINITELY IS NOT "yeh", so go back and fix that shit. This is a good story but by god if you can't fix a single mistake, a simple, basic, elementary mistake, then why the hell are you writing this in the first place?
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  • From ANON - Feedback on March 20, 2012
    Well i have no idea of the pokefandom scene, i just stumbled upon this story, so is this author / scene is dead and nothing is written anymore, please foregive me!


    To your story, a very very nice read, its a shame you stopped at the best part, i really do hope that you will continue this and write more chapters!

    Hoping for more chapters!!!!!!!!!!

    Done let this end!

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  • From grantmatt47 on September 01, 2011
    Thank you. just thank you. I never...not that i can think of in any unpublished series, found such joys in a realistic retelling of my favorite game. its truly a work of pure art. Thank you, for truly making me fall in love with your writing.
    youve given a depressed person soem joy in life
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  • From ANON - Kami-san on June 19, 2011
    Awesome update. Can't wait for more to come.
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  • From ANON - Max10n on February 23, 2011
    Legit. Great use of Macho Brace and the description of it. I hadn't read this in forever, and I had to double back at one point and remember which story I was reading. XD
    And do I detect shades of "I yam a scientist" with Yuki? :D
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  • From ANON - Zachary on January 17, 2011
    Newest chapter was very nice.
    I only wish you had as much free time as I do, then you'd be done with the next chapter in a couple days.
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  • From StevieRayStrong on January 09, 2011
    Finally caught up, I now need to say it's quite an exciting and gripping tale. Pretty much everything about it is good: the mystery of what will happen to Luna once she obtains all of the plates; the excitement and anxiety of the battles; the interactions between all the characters, especially Luna and Noah; and the exact intents of not only Cyrus, but High Noon and so on. Lots of possibilities.

    No major problems, just some grammar errors that are infrequent, but they don't detract from the story in any way.

    A well deserved five star rating is bestowed upon you, good sir!
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  • From ANON - Barenblood on December 03, 2010
    Great story. Honestly love the time you've put into growing Luna's and Noah's relationship. Adds real depth to the story.
    Can't wait for the next chapter.
    Playing the waiting game isn't very fun. XD
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  • From ANON - darkenite on July 07, 2010
    the more you update the more i love you
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  • From Perfect Purity on July 06, 2010
    Hey man! I've been missing from this story but now that I've read it all I can't figure out why I ever left. Hooray for Mawile! ^_^

    My story's done, so check it out when you get some time!
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  • From aragdoll on February 20, 2010
    Nooo, Dave! Noah/Luna forever!

    I feel a bit bad for Jerry - he's really an observer in this whole debacle, having missed literally every major event, if only by a few minutes in some cases.

    I hope for his sake, he gets the girl.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From daveb on February 17, 2010
    Brilliant, as usual. I love your character development and fight scenes.

    I was really for the pairing to be Noah/Lyn though.
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  • From aragdoll on January 29, 2010
    Late review, but I really enjoyed the Christmas special.

    Keep up the good work! :D
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  • From the42jabberwocky on January 19, 2010
    you killed cynthia...YOU KILLED CYNTHIA!!! Arg that made me upset. I think there's some goot review material for the chapter were you kill cynthia. Now, this is just my take on the characters, but I think your playing Cynthia and Cyrus all wrong. To me, Cyrus is an emotionless madman, not some emotional schizophrenic as he seems to come across in this. Cythia also acts like a little girl compared to how I envisioned her to act. She broke to easily. She would know she was going to die anyway, and with holding information would either result in her bleeding to death or being kept alive. Other than that whole interrogation at the end it was a good chapter. I'll get over you killing cynthia eventually. Its still a good story. But I really think the interrogation could use some work.
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  • From the42jabberwocky on January 19, 2010
    chapter 4 was pretty intense. I need to take a little break after reading it. I get so wrapped up in things it twists me around inside. Only a couple comments that I think might catch your interest. While the chapter itself is well structured, haveing so many nameless characters in one scene near the end was kind of confusing for me. I lost track of what voice belonged to what description. Of course thinking about it afterward it made sense, but while reading it I got all confused. Most likely just me there so ignore that. The battle played out well and your style with it is something I should emulate. The same goes for your character thinking to themselves. I'm not grammar savoy as a whole so I tend to make thoughts their own paragraphs instead of making them work like dialog.

    It was aggravating to see such destruction so early, but in a good way. It reminds us that life can be a real bitch a lot of the time and gives us all that wake up call that we often need. Yet another thing for me to emulate. Overall well done, I will continue on as soon as I finish this here sentence, like so.
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