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Reviews for Shades of Time

By : vbruce
  • From Tazzy on December 20, 2007
    oooh! *giggles* Hakuryuu has a pair of fan girls who want to love him and squeeze him and name him Goerge...

    Wait. Wrong cartoon.

    *snuggles Rei* poor thing.

    Lovely as always.
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  • From zetsuai2005 on December 20, 2007
    Hey! I miss your posting for a little while and you already have 8 chapters done! The plot is progressing nicely, and I'm very much interested. I'm glad there's _someone_ Konzen isn't pissy with. It's strange not to see Tenpou and Kenren involved with each other (as in many fanfics). Your writing is excellent as always, and I eagerly await seeing if Rei can woo Hakkai on earth. It looks like she is making progress in the flashbacks of Heaven, and they say 'as in Heaven, so on earth'. I like your fresh approach to the pairings we usually see, and the story line is fresh, too. This is a good, easy read that promises to be very entertaining. It takes a lot of work to make something look effortless!
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  • From Tazzy on December 18, 2007
    *applauds* Oh wonderful! Love how she tore into those idiots attacking Goku. They really deserved what they got.

    *snickers* I'd feel sorry for Tenpou but she's been chasing him so long that turn about's fair play.
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  • From Tazzy on December 14, 2007
    *cackles* That's one way to meet someone.

    "Hey, I was just helping..." *PUNCH* "ow. That's gonna leave a bruise..."

    And I could almost see the conversation between Rei and Sanzo under less tense situations.

    "Hey Pretty Boy."
    "Bite me, bitch."
    "Time and Place."

    And going on from there.

    *grins* Wonderful chapter and looking forward to more.
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  • From Tazzy on December 12, 2007
    *cackles and watches the 2x4 Dress hit Tenpou right between the eyes*

    Now to watch Tenpou chase Shi-ne for a bit when she starts to distance herself from him......
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  • From Tazzy on December 09, 2007
    *snickers* I have this sneaky suspicion that Anya's gonna fit right in with this crazy group and possibly Rei as well. *snickers* I'm sure Hakaryuu would be more than willing to stretch slightly to accomidate them all.

    *blinks at the sudden image of Sanzo between Goyja and Rei* *shakes head* Sorry, got distracted there by that twin thing you got me hooked on with Gun and Hunter.....
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  • From Tazzy on December 06, 2007
    aw! Shi's so cute and sweet. *cackles* love her attitude towards Konzen. Just like brother and sister. Always annoying the other and getting away with it.

    So, which one does she have a crush on: Tenpou or Kenren?

    *snickers* Why can I see her wearing a skirt and her military jacket over it? or worse, the dress and their version of combat boots?
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  • From Tazzy on December 02, 2007
    *drools* Sanzo in just those tight jeans and his black sleeveless tight top.....

    And I can see him leaving the would be rapists to his three companions....
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  • From Tazzy on November 29, 2007
    *giggles* Oh I'm gonna like her!

    can't wait to see more.*smirks*
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  • From Ohajiki on November 29, 2007
    I am normally a yaoi fan I have to admit, but you sound liek you have an interesting idea and I'd like to give you some advice.

    Include more description in your writing and it with make your humour stand out more, you seem to have quite a good knack for speech so balance it with description.

    Also, your heroine is called Shi-ne, now this maybe deliberate on your side but if not, "Shi-ne" is an order you give to someone which translates as "Die!", "Just die" or "you die".

    But still I am interested
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  • From Tazzy on November 28, 2007
    Saiyuki!!!! Woohoo!!!

    *grins* Interesting start. So which of the Blaize group is this or is it someone completely new?
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  • From zetsuai2005 on November 28, 2007
    Oooohh, a mystery! Top notch writing, as always. And if The Merciful Goddess is interested, look out! Do tell us more!
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