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Reviews for Shades of Time

By : vbruce
  • From Dambae on April 27, 2008
    Love it. And Shi and the females under her command rock hard. Honestly, it's nice to see a group of anime characters who don't fall to pieces whenever they stand out in the rain for 5 minutes.

    Can't wait for the next installment :)
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  • From Tazzy on April 27, 2008
    *cuddles Shi and the Boys* So cute together. Poor Nataku....

    *snerks* Kenren doesn't do anything the normal way does he?
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  • From zetsuai2005 on April 18, 2008
    The soldiers are gathering and preparing their weapons for a big confrontation with the large group of youkai. I'm glad Rei will have Hakkai at her back. It's odd that Sanzo didn't want to participate--or maybe he is reinforcements if something gets sticky, or the youkai attack the inn. I wonder what Rei and Hakkai will have to say or do with each other before the battle begins. If Rei has been hunting these creatures before, she may have valuable information to share with the ikkou for their journey further westward. So does this mean Tenpou and Shine fought together in heaven? Excellent writing. I liked the little interlude before the attack begins. Wait--by hunting does Rei mean she is going out after the youkai before they even attack?
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  • From Dambae on April 16, 2008
    I opened my mind to a straight Saiyuki story, and I'm really glad I did! Captivating. I look forward to reading the next installment, and only regret that I didn't wait until the completion of the story to start reading it, as I hate waiting!
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  • From Tazzy on April 14, 2008
    *cackles* Rei and Sanzo's relationship has not crumbled any even if they don't realize it. *snerks* Shi and Konzen are alive and snarking at each other, people. Place your bets!
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  • From zetsuai2005 on April 14, 2008
    Some people are just a little slow, ne? So, he misses her, he admires her, he loves her ... so what's he going to do about it? Excellent writing, very descriptive. I could picture each scene in my mind perfectly, in living technicolour. And Kenren cutting herbs? Priceless! I'll bet he did it with his sword so he wouldn't have to bend over! More, please!
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  • From Tazzy on April 01, 2008
    *howls with laughter* Go Shi-ne! That will teach them!

    *snickers* Should I start feeling sorry for Tenpou yet?
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  • From BishiMistress on April 01, 2008
    AHH! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! OMFG! That's friggin f'hilarious! Nothing makes for a beautiful punishment like complete and utter humiliation. Much better than just flat out beating them. Though, the spanking should be enough to keep them walking funny for a while, you know, keep it fresh in everyone's memory. *deep satisfied inhale* Ahhh.... the diabolical mind of the great Shi. I think I love her too now ;)
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  • From BishiMistress on March 26, 2008
    I...Hn..Ng....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..... Hakkai with claws and fangs...... *has melted and gone to a very very happy place* I love the idea of Rei instructing him sort of when it comes to his demonic self, as Hakkai has always been the teacher up to this point. Awesome chapter, as always. Now if Tenpou and Shi could just catch up... lol
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  • From zetsuai2005 on March 25, 2008
    At last! I knew they would get physical sooner or later, but I was totally surprised that Hakkai is going all youkai with his limiters still on! Excellent writing, as always. Rei is too hot for words, and she is tender toward Hakkai in his state of confusion. She really could help him a lot to accept his youkai nature and use it to his advantage. So if this is a reflection of what had happened in heaven, then Shine must have had to teach Tenpou something there to help him, or facilitate them getting together. Can't wait to see what happens next. More and more interesting and complex as it goes along.
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  • From Tazzy on March 25, 2008
    *cackles* Go Rei! Show Hakkai to really enjoy himself. *snickers*

    Serves Kanan right, because she threw him away. *smirks* Still think it's cool Rei can see and talk to ghosts.

    *grins and bounces* This is getting good (or even better, hard to tell 'cause everything's good).
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  • From BishiMistress on March 08, 2008
    Nope, nope, can't be. Grey eyes don't exist in real life, ask Scott ;) Maybe if Tenpou is in to blue-grey eyes I actually have a chance! *doesn't have a chance and won't hold her breath* Short, but important. Hell of a conversation to overhear. I'm kinda surprised she hasn't just bowled her way out the front door by now. I think the first thing she should do, after she makes Tenpou squirm until he finally admits to being attracted to her, is slap him and tell him it took his ass long enough ;) That's me, and I dun like slow pokes. *glares at her misbehavin' puppy* Nameless slow pokes, mind you.... ;) Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more!
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  • From zetsuai2005 on March 07, 2008
    Wahoo!! Rei and Hakkai in a clinch! Hope that is soon reflected in a flashback of heaven! Shine seems to have both a friend and guard dog in Konzen, but he is softening toward Tenpou. I was shocked he knew about her eyes, too! Like I said, surprises in every chapter. Gojyo is such a sweetheart, whether he's a general or a kappa. I wonder if he is going to plead Tenpou's case. Tenpou really has been a jerk to Shine, I'm sure she's going to need some convincing. Character development in this fic has been excellent. Your writing is a joy to read.
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  • From Tazzy on March 07, 2008
    Yay! There's hope for Tenpou yet!

    Now if only Konzen can restrain himself from killing the Field Marshal while Kenren works on Shi....
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  • From BishiMistress on March 01, 2008
    dum dum dummmmmm. Why aren't they stopping? Well, I know why Rei isn't, and that's because Hakkai is a sexy bitch. MM. I love me some Hakkai. PLEASE tell me that she weasles those limiters off. Be a kinder goddess than the Merciful Goddess *big puppy dog eyes* and let them like fall off when he takes his shirt off or something. *is deranged but still has good ideas* All right, my finger's all swol up ;) and hurtin' like a biz-nitch, so I'ma head to bed. Can't wait for more! >.
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