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Reviews for Shades of Time

By : vbruce
  • From zetsuai2005 on January 23, 2008
    Short but mysterious. Regardless of his past troubles with Shine, Tenpou seems to have a lot of respect for her squad and what their accomplishments have been. So maybe now some conscious reassessment of her as more than a nuisance. Though brief, your descriptive talents are showing. I'm on the edge of my seat!
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  • From Tazzy on January 21, 2008
    Interesting... very interesting.. *snickers* I'd feel sorry for Tenpou, but really... of course he and Shi need to be locked in a closet until they get things worked out between them.
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  • From zetsuai2005 on January 17, 2008
    Hard questions, indeed! Is it just me or is Sanzo starting to act civil (relatively speaking, of course) to the ikkou as he did to Shine and the group in heaven in the recent flashbacks we have seen. He's much too clever and holy (though he'd deny that with his dying breath) to just let these coincidences go uninvestigated. I think Gojyo was very much a friend to Hakkai to answer his question honestly. And if Gojyo can see the issue so clearly, then Sanzo probably too might think the same way about Kanan's actions--or even Goku? Though he's too kind to ever hurt Hakkai by saying that uninvited. Your story is getting more and more interesting. I'm starting to wonder what will happen to the journey west if the ikkou get involved with earthly relationships. There's not any extra room in Jippu, yet the Minus Wave must be nullified. I feel something very, very bad is going to happen. But in the mean time I am enjoying what you're doing with this plot. Excellent work!
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  • From Tazzy on January 16, 2008
    Well, Hakkai asked, and unfortunately, the Truth is an even more Harsh Mistress than Gravity.

    Trust me, right now I doubt there's anything bad that you can write. Even a PWP. *grins*

    *snickers* Gonna be interesting to see who all ends up going with them and who doesn't.
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  • From Tazzy on January 10, 2008
    *Snuggles Shi-ne* Poor girl. *smickers* DOn't worry. Once Tenpou gets the CLue Bat Dent in his thick skull straightened out, he'll figure out how to make various things better.

    *smirks* More? Please?
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  • From zetsuai2005 on January 10, 2008
    There's just something so appealing about a woman in charge, though supposedly there should have been no distinction in heaven. Looks like Tenpou is confused over many things, not the least of which is his sudden realisation that he doesn't know Shine at all .. and now he really wants to! I hope she does a number on those men who beat up Goku. What a spineless thing to do. Excellent writing, as always. New surprises in every chapter. I'm glad she called Tenpou on acting hypocritically. It seems like he is just following the scent of her crotch and not thinking things through.
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  • From zetsuai2005 on January 06, 2008
    What the #£*'@!! Kanan selfish? The idea is so ... well, ... uh, ... reasonable .... You've just turned everything I thought I knew about Saiyuki on its ear!! What have I really been seeing and thinking when I would watch it? Obviously not what was right there before my eyes. What a fresh and amazing idea! I started not to read this story, since I am not into het at all, but look what I would have missed! Thank you for daring to say what others would have dismissed out of loyalty to fanon, if not canon. You just keep getting better and better with your insight into characters. Excellent writing, and thinking!
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  • From Tazzy on January 06, 2008
    *snickers* and Hakkai's smacked up along side the head with the CLue 2x4 that says "Hey! You don't need the guilt over something *she* chose to do."

    *claps* Lovely chapter. Love the interaction between Rei and Hakkai.

    *rests chin on folded arms.* WHere's the next part?
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  • From Raynee on January 04, 2008
    This is intersting, but question are you gonna continue your Deadly Beautiful fic? I like that one to and would love to see it continued
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  • From Tazzy on January 01, 2008
    *snuggles Goku* Poor guy. Nightmares like that are *no* fun whatsoever.

    *cackles* Run, Shi. The Evil Tenpou has you in his graps and he's looking at you differently now!

    Lovely as always. And you keep writing and I'll keep reviewing.
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  • From zetsuai2005 on January 01, 2008
    Hmmmmm, it seems like Goku is trying to get Tenpou and Shine together ... though in his innocence he may just be needing support from his friends. His nightmare sounds scary, I hope it is not prophetic. Wonderful job in setting the action on earth up by flashbacks to heaven. Superb writing, you make it look so easy. Action flows like honey.
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  • From zetsuai2005 on December 30, 2007
    I agree with Shi in heaven, that if all that's making Tenpou notice her is her looks she doesn't want the attention. After all his negative comments to her, I would be leery of an about face, too. Sanzo is actually talking to someone in a civil manner in this story, both in heaven and as Sanzo. It's a welcome change. But I like the feelings of connection that Hakkai and Rei express. It's not like they'll have their leisure to gradually explore each other. Things move pretty quickly in the land of the minus wave. I wonder if Goku will pick up on feeling a connection, too, like he did before about his former friend and protector. This story is just gliding along smooth as silk, with revelations in each chapter. Wonderful storytelling! Keep going!
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  • From Tazzy on December 28, 2007
    *hands Sanzo a sniper rifle* Ni Janyi is thataway. Go for it, Darling. He deserves it for "Kami-Sama" if nothing else.

    *smirks* Gotta love Kanzeon. Se's always interesting.

    And the interaction between Rei and Hakkai is just plain *fun*.
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  • From Tazzy on December 23, 2007
    Kozen knows the way to her bedroom 'cause she's his spritual sister silly. Even if neither will admit it.

    *snickers* Poor Tenpou. Poor Shi. hopefully they'll get their acts together if not in one life in the next.

    *claps* bravo! Bravo!
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  • From zetsuai2005 on December 21, 2007
    I'm surprised that Rei had such a sad ending to her father's life. A very unusual and noble thing for a youkai to do, but indicative of the kind of character he instilled in his daughter. I'm impressed with Goku's uncharacteristic generosity with his food. When Rei promised the Merciful Goddess that she would return to heaven if she hadn't found Tenpou after 500 years, I thought she would be cognisant of who she used to be in heaven while on earth, but her comment about the men in Chapter 9 makes me think that she isn't aware, much the same as the Sanzo party doesn't remember its origins. I wonder how this will figure into Rei and Hakkai getting together. And Sanzo actually made a civil comment! This story is getting more and more interesting. The frequent updates are great!
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