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Reviews for Shades of Time

By : vbruce
  • From Tazzy on February 26, 2008
    WOoHoo!!! Go Xan! You've got yourself one by the balls even if he is only starting to realize it....

    *giggles* and Rei, better make sure that there's enough room in Jeep for you and Xan 'cause I get this feeling you're both going along....
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  • From zetsuai2005 on February 26, 2008
    Did you just post two chapters together or have I been asleep? Happy to see them, though. One chapter from heaven and one from earth, that's cool, so the action is eventually going to synch. It's amazing the raw power Shi wields, as evidenced by what it took to cool her down even enough to regain consciousness. Looks like Tenpou is going to have to go through Konzen to get to Shi. On earth, though, Hakkai and Rei are taking a more direct, express route to a meeting of the ... uh ... minds. Encouragement from dead husbands and siblings aside, I think Hakkai and Rei are about to get together solely on their own initiative. I loved how Hakuryuu could talk to the larger dragon. Can they transform also? Xan is a firecracker! She seems more the type to follow Gojyo than wait for him to return. Nice advancement of the plot. Very appealing pacing and excellent writing. You make it look so easy to get into these characters' heads, but every chapter you surprise me with what unfolds next!
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  • From Tazzy on February 21, 2008
    *snickers* Every chapter I read of her, I fall a bit more in love with Shi. Love her loyalty to her troops and their loyalty to her as well as the confusion Tenpou's tossing at her.

    *grins8 Konzen and Shi have *got* to be adopted siblings even if they don't realize it or call each other "sibling".
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  • From BishiMistress on February 14, 2008
    it's getting crowded in this place! I'll never understand how you keep so many characters straight in your head. a dragon breeder, eh? Sounds interesting to say the least. *is too lazy for caps tonight* very nice chapter as always! Waiting for more, as always ;) *is tired and going to bed now*
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  • From zetsuai2005 on February 13, 2008
    I really liked this chapter! It's wonderful when I run across women who are written to be strong, smart, capable and kind. Sexy and smart, what a great combination to stir things up. I'm happy Gojyo is going to see some action from someone above the usual barflies he attracts. He's too sweet and cool to settle for dregs. I hope nothing happens to Shun and her children. You're making me really start to care about these people. Seems like Anya has plans to get Rei and Hakkai together. That will probably happen naturally, reflecting the growing attraction of Tenpou to Shine in the flashbacks of heaven. This chapter was packed with a lot of information and set ups for impending action. Excellent writing.
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  • From Tazzy on February 11, 2008
    *cackles* yeah, they're related....

    *snickers* love Xan. Her and Goyja will probably get on like a house on fire.....
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  • From zetsuai2005 on February 11, 2008
    What an interesting description of the use of lightning power! Tenpou is having many observations on how much he _doesn't_ know about Shine. Not only is she beautiful, kind to Goku and kick-ass powerful, but she commands a unit which thinks very highly of her and are loyal to a fault. All this might be too intimidating to him to get past to get to her. He has a lot of past words and actions against her to make up for. Can't wait to find out what Konzen can do for her healing which no one else can do! Inspired and imaginative writing. Your Shine is quite a gal.
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  • From BishiMistress on February 07, 2008
    Poor poor Tenpou... still struggling. Someone should slap him upside the head, that might help! :DPoor baby Goku getting beat up by fucking stupid ass holes. *oops* little verbal flatulence there. good chapter. Wonder what waking up in her house will be like?
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  • From BishiMistress on February 07, 2008
    *feels like a bad san franciscan for not knowing that* Interesting background. Dying to get back to Tenpou and Shi though!
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  • From BishiMistress on February 07, 2008
    Wow. o.O Stupid much? I'm like... dumbfounded. That is all. Awesome chapter.
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  • From BishiMistress on February 07, 2008
    Hakuryu likes her, so she must be a good girl. Though, I'm trying really hard not to be upset about the shiner she gave Hakkai. We all have moments where we overreact, right? It's ok, he's still beautiful. lol It's about time Hakuryu got pampered! Little lovely. I want one! one to the next chapter!
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  • From BishiMistress on February 07, 2008
    So sad. Men are so complete in their denial sometimes. Seems as though Tenpou is about to be slapped out of it though. Squee! Moving on to the next chapter because I'm all excited now.
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  • From Tazzy on January 31, 2008
    *cheers* Go Shi! Show then why you made general... even if it leaves some of them with nightmares. *smirks* Or wet dreams.

    I'd almost feel sorry for Tenpou if I didn't think he deserved to suffer just a bit for what he put Shi through.
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  • From Tazzy on January 27, 2008
    *smirks* It does serve Kanan right to be able to see and hear Hakkai and not be seen or heard in return. Sorry, still think she was a coward. And other that they've brought along with them? *evil grin* Do tell....

    Thanks for the update. It's a great way to start what is going to be one *long* day at work....
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  • From zetsuai2005 on January 27, 2008
    Wouldn't it be nice if all those who had lost youkai loved ones due to the Minus Wave could talk to them again as they were before they were berzerk? Rei is unique and special in many ways, but I think it means something that Hakkai could see the ghost, too. I'm sorry, but I just don't feel Kanan's pain. I guess once the eyes of my understanding have been opened they can't be closed again. You have some interesting and unique plot devices here, some I've never seen in other stories. Very well written and imaginative relevations.
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