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Reviews for AnK - Black Moon Rising

By : ElegantPaws
  • From ankfanforever on June 30, 2009
    Oh, Jupiter! I am so glad you continued! I really hope it will be a next time! That was incredibly hot! And Guy watching.... Yeah, that was a really nice touch. Raoul gets himself into big trouble with "amber eyes"; hey, Elites, be aware, these mongrels are nothing but pure sweet poison! Kudos, your style is so refined and sophisticated, it makes my heart hurt.
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  • From ANON - Anise on June 30, 2009
    (6) Loved it and I definitely think there's going to be another time ^.^ The power play between them was so good, that shift back and forth, just when one thinks he's in control it can all change in a second. One thing I noticed is how you've held on to their difference of position without resorting to S&M. Too often people seem to think that Blondies exert their control with physical violence (yes i realize there are some aspects of bondage) but really the thing about them is that they really don't have to, most of it's actually psychological. And Guy seeing what happened, I loved that twist although I also wanted to smack him for spying, the sneaky bugger. I'm glad he got put in his place by the bouncer, I hope he has many more encounters with him :)
    Fabulous story, I thought you did so well in keeping it true to the feel of the original. I have nothing against happy AU stories that have happy endings for all but it's nice to see one that seems to fit with the reality of what's happening to these guys in the original. Now I know you come from more popular fandoms but I hope the small amount of reviews doesn't discourage you from writing more of the AnK guys, I would love another story by you ^_^
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  • From ankfanforever on June 27, 2009
    This is indeed a very good ank story. The only regret is that I have to imagine what will happen next. Katze is really special and Raoul seems to know everything about how to turn him around. The heat between them is realistic and fantastic at the same time. I have no words of praise to match the feelings I had reading your story. One of the best RaoulxKatze I've ever read.
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  • From Avernion on June 20, 2009
    Oh, I do hope you're not planning on ending it like that. The word for that is; "cruel", laugh. I think you have captured the coldness of the elite most perfectly. I assume Katze's dick has been regrown? Raoul hinted at that in the first chapter even, right? Lol, well, I want to stay with this story for as long as possible. I really hope it won't end with these five chapters and I would even like to read something even longer. Like 20 chapters or 50. Laugh. :3 You are doing really good!
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  • From ANON - Anise on June 20, 2009
    (5) I think you're trying frustrate me to no end by stopping the chapter there, it was just getting to the good part (i swear i didn't say that in a whiny voice ;). I also liked how you kept up with the tension - is something bad going to happen, your never quite sure Raoul isn't all of a sudden going to lash out. I also loved how even in the middle of sex Raoul can't help but be the analytical creature that he is. Although with these two they both tend to think a little too much, with Katze though it's more a survival technique than anything. Another great chapter, despite having to wait I'm glad that there's going to be more :)
    By the way thank you for the email to my last review.^^ I always love it when the authors respond to reviews, plus it pretty much guaranteed you a review for every remaining chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - typhoonjane on June 17, 2009
    I have always enjoyed your story telling, letting the particulars unfold with the story and the characters reaction to each other. I was thrilled to discover you in AnK and I burn to read the rest of your story. Elegant, indeed you are.
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  • From ANON - Anise on June 17, 2009
    It's so rare that there's actually a new AnK story that you almost feel like you have to review no matter what - of course it really does help that I love the story :) The way that Raoul turned everything around so that he was blaming Katze for everything even his own feelings, then Katze who seems to be so confident and independent, of course all it takes is one word from an elite and he's almost right back to being a kneeling slave. Of course that imbalance is what AnK is all about and you used that so well throughout the story, no matter what if your not an elite you're always walking on the edge, aren't you. Now it says that there should be five chapters and I really hope there is another one because I'll be interested to see what the fall out is from all this is, I'm definitely going to be looking forward to an update ^.^
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