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From KotoriSensei on March 16, 2010
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KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKIiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOW, THIS WAS A HELL OF A CHAPTER!!!! I LOVE IT! EVERY WORD OF IT!!!!
AMAZING! HOW CAN YOU THINK THIS KIND OF PLOTS, AN MORE LIKE IT, THE TWIST YOU CREATE ARE SPECTACULAR!!!!
OK, i'm tired of scream...jijiji
As Jupiter said, apparently this mind erase is better that the late one...she has learn -_- You might think, "Oppps, poor Jupiter, everything is beginning again, she lost her time" but...i don't know, she is THAT: JUPITER! The great machine who control everything and see all, and...she made that mistake? Mmmm, i don't buy it. I believe she is trying to put them together again, so Iason remember and so, they can be happy...specially because when Iason remember again, he will actually marry Riki as Raoul did with Katze....or at least that's what i want....>//
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From LuvLotsaYaoi on March 01, 2010
I'm so sad my last review never went through and I don't know why, but I'll try to make this 1 as good as the 1 I completed 2 minutes ago (waa and it was a long 1 anyway here I go with the short version).

I so loved the latest chapter of "Do You Remember?" it had me in tears (especially when Iason refused to give up Riki's love confession and Riki's dying wish to see the one he loved), but that did NOT stop me from reading it a few more times. I am so sick of Jupiter now it is ridiculous, she really needs to my her own business. Any Hoo back to what I was saying, I have an idea, (light-bulb springs on) tell me if I'm on track with this 1. Katze & Raoul are going to be the key to bring our lover's back together. Katze is going to coerce Raoul (with some special lovin') to "encourage" Iason's memory's. Seeing that the 2 are away on their honeymoon right now it would only be natural that they would do them this favor in return. Also our lovely red-headed, gold eyed HACKER is going to find out that Jupiter sent Riki off world. I kinda figured that out on my own because of the police presence in the end of the story (NOBODY called the police, Jupiter HAD to be monitoring Iason's communication and when Riki contacted him she sent out her "special forces" and if Riki wasn't dying I think she would have had him killed or worse).

I'm looking forward to the next chapter,

Smooches,
Mikki {*.~}
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From KotoriSensei on January 30, 2010
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This was one of a hell chapter!! I cried like there was no tomorrow....TT-TT Buuuuaaaaa!!!! Poor Riky! Poor Iason!!! Poor Kyrie! Poor Guy! poor...everyone! But that end (or should i say, start)well girl...that was just beautifull, congrants. You make a hole new turn over like i haven't seeing before...kkkkkkkiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! It amazing. please continue soon or i might die waiting!!
PD: By the way...imagine the faces of Katze and Raoul when they come back from they honey mon..OoO'''
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From barrie18 on January 20, 2010
Think this was the strongest chapter yet. Good characterization, strong plot, motiviation, truths coming out as well as hidden. . . but once Iason is mindwiped...and although a willing one this time around, it will be very hard not to fall into the trap of repeating the first part of this story. Or him regaining his memory by getting a memory jog.

Riki is a different issue, and there are quite a few things there that were left open. ie....this is Ceres, why did the police show up like that....dead bodies there are a dime a dozen. . . Who did the mind wipe? Where are Katze and Raoul in all this. I can see Raoul trying to sit back and conform, but Katze is another matter. And you just can't leave Kirie tied to the bed or forgiving Guy that easily. . .Personally, I would love to see him walk out the door with Sid, who I always thought had a nicer nature.

Hope you update soon :)

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From ANON - Misaki on January 20, 2010
what the?It's so confusing at the end....Agent Black?Did Riki lost his memory also?
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From ANON - DTE on January 20, 2010
Things got complicated. I wonder who will break the news to Iason and how he'll react.
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From KotoriSensei on January 14, 2010
I'm listening to this very sad song..the perfect scenary for this chapter..T-T iason is just...an Idiot. I'm sorry with myself for saying this but, is true...he is an selfish-proud-idiot... (sigh)
About Katze and Raoul, what a susprise when they return for their honeymoon...jijij I know, i know, it isn't for laughing but...i just do.
It kind of weird to see we are returning to the beginig...just hope it end well...
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From ANON - DTE on January 14, 2010
Things are going downhill pretty fast for Riki. And going back everything will just crumble around him too.
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From ANON - Misaki on January 13, 2010
Please send me something at yaoifangirl89@gmail.com about the story.I got curious.
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From ANON - Misaki on January 13, 2010
Nooooooooooooooo!Don't erase his mind!It will be such a long story.....then i have to wait..(cries)When i read the part when Iason was talking it sounds like he wants to cry or he was crying.Now this is going to be a start all over.And u took so long.Evantually i did not get why Iason behave like this?Thank u!
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From ANON - Orantmihi on January 06, 2010
Hello dear, dear Hespera,

It surprises me how Iason is taking turns on things; treating Riki like rubbish and ignoring him... I really thought he was uninterested in the mongrel, that something hit his head and made him snap out of his longings, seeing Raoul and Katze happily ever after like that. Actually, it's like a circle happening again (when you leave out the fact that we know Iason is doing this to actually not lose Riki at all). In the beginning we have Iason ignorant of Riki's existence, he doesn't acknowledge him, he doesn't love him. And now we have Iason who purposely ignores Riki and not acknowledging his excistence. It's like a deja vu, but then even more tragic (and I like that).

Now for Iason, poor, poor mr Blondie! He doesn't realise what he's doing with his 'special' treatment to make Riki more attached to him. It works the other way around of course, no doubt. Who can blame the mongrel? I greatly agree with Riki; run, while you can... I wonder if it'll make Iason mad... will the Blondie chase Riki and punish him? I think not, really. Iason probably regrets much when he finds out about the result of his behaviour. I'd say: server you right, mr Blondie.

And now this reminds me of how Raoul actually got pwned in his face by Katze (the scene where K. received the job under the table from a whore). You certainly know how to set scores with Blondies. Now I am quitting this long review, since my teacher is patrolling behind my back now. (I'm refraining myself from using shocking words, in case someone glances upon it, lol!) Until the next chapter!

Oh wait, I suspect Guy getting together with Kirie, by the way. I guess I'll find out the next chapter ;) Wouldn't know why he'd hang out with such a brat, though... Unless he's still obsessed with Riki and Kirie is the closest match he can get.
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From LuvLotsaYaoi on January 05, 2010
This story shows just how manipulative Jupiter can be and the sneaky side of Raoul, but it also show the commitment between Iason & Riki. I had to jump for joy when he got his memory back and almost died when he was within breathes of killing Riki, that really should been put upon Raoul. Then the last chapter how sad, I really had to cry as it was progressing. I absolutely love how Riki helped the odd couple to get together (even though they deceived his beloved), but I am ever so disappointed in Iason for not taking Riki as more than a pet (giving he stayed with him through everything he went through ). I know that he had to have something special in store for the beautiful-dark haired-mongrel because it in Iason's nature to upstage Raoul. Katze on the other hand should have know how his friend felt and tried harder to fix things. He knew that Riki had given his all to be with Iason including almost his life on several occasions. Hell Katze himself was part of Riki's demise in the beginning, I am shocked at Amber Eyes' obvious selfish side. I know that the Raoul/Katze pair was bound to happen, but why at the expense of Iason & Riki. I just hope that Iason can find Riki before it's too late and really hope the dear blue eyed god will move the heavens to make up for the horrible over sight on his part. Please keep the awesome story coming. I love it to death. Look forward to the next chapter.
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From KotoriSensei on December 31, 2009
OMG!!! YEAHHHHH!!!! That move is going to rock Iason world!!! Goog for Riki!! I'm goingto celebrate 2 things today: new year and Riki's freedom!!!
Of course, things aren't so easy. Sure the first place Iason will search is Guy's house...because he knows it right? Anyway...I?M SO HAPPY! Lets notforget about Raoul and Katze,they deserve every single second together. But...now i think about it...will all that unhappy group of blondies...maybe something happen...no? No...NONONONONONONONONO!!! Please! Just forget what i said!!! XD
Happy new year!!!!
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From barrie18 on December 30, 2009
Wow it has been a long time hasn't it?

In a way this has become an interval chapter introducing new ideas and several new directions.

I can understand Riki's feelings and I like the fact that he has enough gumption not to lie down and let Iason belittle him, but leaves. I think it is also important to note that with his computer skills he could have left at any time during their relationship, but didn't.

Iason. . .well the Blondies for all their bluster and so called superiority seem to have more issues than the average man. Iason's 'fear' of losing Riki is what this is all about and because of this, he has actually lost him.

Raoul and Katze. . . Romance in bloom and I won't even touch them at the moment.

Riki going back to Guy? Well I can understand why, but this is Guy, who has never gotten over Riki. . .so poor Kiri. . .his fragile world is about to fall apart.. .

Next chapter should be 'interesting' indeed. ...

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From ANON - misaki on December 29, 2009
Iason didn't love riki anymore or what?He's been acting strange?I can't wait to read the part when iason finds out that riki left him for good.
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