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Reviews for Tug-of-War

By : thewriterwhocameinfromthecold
  • From Ryvius on July 07, 2014
    New chapter! Hurrah! I've been waiting for this story to get updated!

    While I do very much like the action in this chapter (as well as the character development we get from the characters, particularly Keitaro), I do feel the action perhaps favored Naru over Kitsune just a little too much.
    The scene with Kitsune at the end was over in like a flash.

    That said, this was still a great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 07, 2014
    This is really a very good and well thought story. I liked it from the very first chapter.
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  • From ANON - Terego on July 07, 2014
    Oh man, the lord of Love Hina returns. Glad to see another chapter with quite a bit of both action and story to it :)
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  • From ANON - Terego on June 06, 2014
    Hope you didn't stop writing! This is one of the best stories on the site, after all :)
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  • From Killerman83ca on May 14, 2014
    I can't wait to see what happens in chapter 23. I hope that Keitaro gets some revenge when he see's Naru and Kitsune in the motel room. I really want to see if Motoko will make a move to spend some time alone with Keitaro soon. Because he might be able to help her with her problem. Or just hold onto her though one of her symptoms. It is only a thought. If I come up with anything else I will PM them to you
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  • From ANON - slingshot on May 06, 2014
    there a chance that Mr. Atama might go for shinobu to?
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  • From Ryvius on April 30, 2014
    Another awesome chapter! Good character moments and development all around!

    Really liked the part with Kitsune, Naru, and Mokoto teaming up to deal with the bullies and laughing together afterwords.

    More development for Mokoto is always nice.

    Great ending to the chapter! Run Keitaro! RUN! Can't wait to see what's next!




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  • From ANON - Anon on April 30, 2014
    Excellent use of innuendo and tease. I give this chapter a 9.9/10.
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  • From ANON - picajump on April 26, 2014
    Up to ch 21 now.

    Nice change of pace, letting Keitaro simmer/rest and give the girls some fleshing out.
    Hmm I wonder how/if you're going to handle the characters that we haven't met yet.
    Obviously Matsumi (watermelon girl) exists, from the note on toy, but that leaves Seto (teacher all love), his daughter Sarah, and Kanako (Keitaro's yandere sister).
    Naru's yearning crush on Seto seems somewhat unlikely now, Kenji just took his place in timeline (during highschool, teacher crush).
    Kanako was a last minute addition, I thought, to the cast, so I don't really expect her unless this story runs as long as the original.
    Much to the disappointment of my yandere kink...
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  • From ANON - hugplx on April 26, 2014
    I feel like that name at the end was supposed to mean something - something with that Aoyamas? - but i can't seem to remember.

    Normally, when you end on a name in that cliffhanger-y way, it does, but given that this story is read in installments, that's a pretty tall order to be asked to remember.
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  • From Ryvius on April 21, 2014
    Another good chapter! More character development with Mokoto (the bit in the bookstore was amusing) and Kitsune. Always a plus!

    I like the way your showing Kitsune's big sister side as well.
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  • From Ryvius on April 13, 2014
    Like the start of this chapter with Keitaro waking up with Naru and Kitsune lying on top of him. That was amusing.

    I gotta say, Motoko's writing really adds a nice touch to this chapter, the way it reflects what's going on in her mind and her mood and all.

    I'm actually kinda interested in seeing what's going with Motoko's friends as well.

    Can't wait to see what happens next!


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  • From ANON - picajump on April 12, 2014
    Just finished chapter 11, and I wanted to say before continuing that this is awesome.
    The characters feel perfect and there's still Love Hina's defining romantic difficulties; though Keitaro isn't worked up about his promise yet.
    I would easily say this is The best Love Hina fanfic I've read so far, and certainly great overall.

    I hope for many more chapters!
    Which is probably why reviewing now, I'm holding off inevitable disappoint that there's a last chapter!
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  • From Killerman83ca on April 04, 2014
    I can't wait to see what happens in Chapter 18. I will re-post this when I get logged in again. So please update soon.
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  • From Ryvius on March 28, 2014
    Glad to see things are starting to progress with the whole Keitaro/Motoko thing. Really liked the bit with Keitaro pacing back and forth while going crazy trying to muster up the courage to go stand up to Motoko. Was kinda hoping for something fun like the dual in the manga (never saw the anime) where Keitaro beat her by accidentally catching the blade, but still, this is interesting. Keitaro definitely has to find a way to earn her respect though, otherwise I don't see their relationship truly getting better anytime soon.

    I also like the scene's with Motoko taking her first attempts at writing stories. Wonder(hoping) if she'll start writing the romance stories like in the manga?

    Can't wait to see what happens next!
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