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Reviews for Tug-of-War

By : thewriterwhocameinfromthecold
  • From Ryvius on January 11, 2014
    Damn, exciting and eventful couple of chapters!

    Naru getting jealous and possessive! Keitaro finding out about the bet! And best of all, Mokoto's return!!! She's one of my favorites, so I hope you do her justice!

    Can't wait to learn more about her back story in this fic. Seems like there's something going on with her, judging by the call she made to her sister at the end.

    Excellent work. I look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Leeslane on January 02, 2014
    To be honest I'd have suggested detailing Keitaro's reaction to Kitsune's outfit in chapter 9, but this wasn't bad. Wondering exactly how you intend to make this a harem fic when so far all the action has been Kitsune and Naru.
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  • From Killerman83ca on December 25, 2013
    Please update has soon as you can. I can't wait to see what happen's in chapter 9.
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  • From Ryvius on December 24, 2013
    Love the bit with Kitsune reflecting on her love of dancing, and how she swears to dance for Keitaro soon. Very sensual and stuff.

    There's Shinobu!

    Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - hugplx on December 24, 2013
    Not a fan of the whole 'hide who I am from KEitaro' kind of deal - specifically referring to the previous chapter where Naru gets scared Keitaro's friends recognized her for her slutty ways. She is what she is, and she'd be much sexier if she owned that rather than be ashamed of it.
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  • From ANON - popeyedboy@gmail.com on December 23, 2013
    Surprisingly deep this episode.
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  • From Killerman83ca on December 20, 2013
    I would like to know what the IOU that Kitsune was talking about. So please post some more chapter's. I can't wait to see what 8. So please update when you get a chance. I love reading what is going on. But it will be scary when Motoko come's back.
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  • From Ryvius on December 19, 2013
    Two chapters! Awesome!

    Let's see, I like how Naru is taking Keitaro's feelings into account, though that bit she said to Kitsune “If you don’t know, I can’t make you understand" irked me a bit.

    LOL, I love this 'Great Man Drought' Mokoto apparently caused.

    Something I just noticed, but where's Shinobu? Su's here, Mokoto's out on a training camp, but Shinobu's no where to be seen.
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  • From Ryvius on December 06, 2013
    Great chapter! I like the way Kitsune seduced Keitaro and particularly the part where she fantasized about what she'd do to him (or he to her).

    I really like the way you portray Kitsune here.

    Excellent work! I can't wait for more!
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  • From Killerman83ca on December 06, 2013
    I can't wait to see what happen's in Chapter 6. How about you do up two chapter's and post them at the same time. I would really like to see Naru and Kitsune agrue which one is better and Keitaro get's involed by doing them both at the same time. It is only another thought. If I get anymore I will PM them to you though the forum if you have an account there. So please keep up the good work.
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  • From Killerman83ca on December 03, 2013
    Can you please update with Chatper 5 soon. I would like to know what will happen between the three of them and if Keitaro will date both of them. They can take turn's on dating him. It is only a thought.
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  • From Ryvius on November 28, 2013
    Enjoying the fic so far, hope to see much more of it in the future. A fun smutty version of Love Hina certainly sounds like an entertaining idea. I do like how the characters still have their personalities mostly intact, if slightly altered.

    Hope to see Mokoto, Mutsumi, and Tsuruko (along with all the other girls of course) in the future as well!

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From hamwi2000 on October 22, 2013
    Please send an email to me
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2013
    Very good. I like how you allowed things to build up before anyone had sex.
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  • From ANON - Harem Lover on October 08, 2013
    Love this story, I always wanted a sexy rewrite of love hina and now your doing it. Of couse I like the manga better than the anime still keep it up
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