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Reviews for Tug-of-War

By : thewriterwhocameinfromthecold
  • From ANON - killerman83ca on March 24, 2014
    I can't wait to see what happens in Chapter 18. I will re-post this when I get logged in again. So please update soon.
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  • From ninesenshi on March 21, 2014
    I have been enjoying this fic, though it is very slow to develop for something with `Harem' as a code. With that in mind, it worries me that you started another fic. I hope you continue to focus on Tug-of-War.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 21, 2014
    Good chapter, though terrible spelling.

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2014
    The first couple of chapters are very good. This looks like it will be a good story.

    pak40
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  • From NightEye on February 20, 2014
    Well, didn't see THAT particular twist coming.
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  • From ANON - SpectralTime on February 20, 2014
    As someone who is thoroughly sick and tired of lemon writers shunting Shinosuke out of the way with some quick character assassination so that Keitaro and Tsukiko can hook up, just because they *assume* our brains would smoke and fail at the thought of someone *else* having sex in a Love Hina story, I have to say: good show.

    Now to catch up on what I missed...
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  • From ANON - Leeslane on February 20, 2014
    Tsuruko having a happy married life is pretty rare. Motoko lusting after someone who isn't Keitaro in a lemon. Even more rare. Refreshing to see.
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  • From Ryvius on February 20, 2014
    Interesting chapter. First mention of Mitsumi in the story. Can't wait to see her in the story!

    Funny, I completely forgot that Tsuruko was married.

    Like what you've done with Mokoto's back story. Gonna be fun seeing the character interactions between her and Keitaro later on.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From Ryvius on February 11, 2014
    Nice pair of chapters! Amalla is a lot of fun here.

    It will be interesting to see if/how Keitaro's encounter with Amalla will effect anything in the next chapters.
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  • From Killerman83ca on February 10, 2014
    I cna't wait to see what happen's next. I'll bet that Keitaro will lift a lid when he find's out that she is Su's sister. I forgot her name. Sorry. So please update soon with the next chapter's. I would really like to see Haruka get some action from Keitaro just one time to see how much he has learned from spending time at the dorm with the girls.
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  • From ninesenshi on February 10, 2014
    Read the Amalla encounter. Sexy stuff. Hopefully now that he has been to love boot-camp Keitaro is ready for some harem building. 'I'll be with both of you, or neither of you. Decide.'
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  • From ANON - Terego on February 08, 2014
    Great to see you back again, hope you'll continue updating the fic. It is surprisingly deep for being, well, on this page :P
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  • From Ryvius on February 06, 2014
    Interesting chapter. Gonna be fun seeing how these new elements will play out, such as Keitaro being mad at Naru and Kitsune, Motoko obviously despising him, this new girl at the end here (I assume that's either Su's adult form or her older sister), etc.

    Hmmm, while I see where Naru's attitude is coming from, I don't think I like how she's acting all morally superior to Kitsune, since she's equally to blame. Eh, it's probably just stemming from her newfound jealousy/possessiveness.

    Great work! Keep it up!




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  • From Killerman83ca on January 20, 2014
    I have a funny feeling that Motoko will be getting some action soon. Also another girl will get some also. Tsuruko that is. So please update as soon as you can. I can't wait to see what happen's in chapter 13. So please update as soon as you can
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  • From ninesenshi on January 13, 2014
    Well, it's been quite good so far, especially considering I don't usually like fics with slutty versions of modest characters. Hoping we get to the harem part. Hopefully Keitaro can tame Motoko.
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