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Reviews for The Sous-Chef

By : redqueen
  • From ANON - Darkanger on January 08, 2006
    Oh, the suspense. I want to see a fight. I want to see a fight. I love conflict and it is rife for the taking here.
    Can I just say that is one of my favorite stories ever. I adore post series stories in the WK fandom. You have done so well with the characterizations. I was so excited when I saw that the story was updated that I can honestly and without shame, say that I nearly wet myself- nearly. Don't worry, my chair is still safe and dry. But I do love this story and hope you do find a conclusion for it but not too soon. Please keep up the great writing.
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  • From ANON - Hibiki-chan on January 05, 2006
    Yahoooooo! An update! Keep it up!
    More scenes for Yohji and Schuldig!
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  • From ANON - Eboni on January 04, 2006
    I will start off by saying I love Yohji/Schuldig pairings and can never find enough of them to get enough of them lol. I love how you tell us how the relationship developed. Schuldig was more of the rebound guy that turned into something more. I love how Yohji realizes he loves Schuldig probably more than anyone else, though he's still fatally attarcted to Aya. But there's a big difference between attraction (lust) and real love, but its still hard to see your man getting hard over an ex. Schu is being very, very, very mature. I respect him because it could not have been me in his place. Yohji would have no nuts and Aya would have no face lol!

    Ken is scary. I'm veyr glad that he is seeking help, but Omi..er...Mamarou and Nagi playing babysitters is great. Nagi is a character I want to see more of and get into, and now that everyone's back together I know we'll see more of him. I'm very interested in the fact that Nagi is excited about seeing Schuldig when Schu said Nagi is never looks forward to seeing anyone. I want to see that interaction. I like Nagi/Scgu brotherly love stories too. Too cute for words in my opinion.

    Gosh, Mamarou is moody. Wonder if his drastic shift in mood towards Schu holds a little jealousy. Because he didn't turn noticeably cold and hostile until Schuldig was confused that Nagi was looking forward to seeing him and that he didn't look forward to seeing nayone. Could there be something there on Nagi's part?

    This is a very good story and it has been a while since I have found a Weiss story to get into. I think I'm only keeping up with a handful of them right now. Thank you for such a good read and I hope you update soon!

    Luv,
    Ebs
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  • From ANON - kikvws on January 01, 2006
    Excellent! Love how you've written the interactions, especially between Ken and Aya. Couldn't agree more about the Aya-worship, and I love the new spin you've added on Aya's empty bouts of promiscuity. More please!
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  • From ANON - Sky Rat on January 01, 2006
    Gahhh. This chapter is so much shorter than the others. I'm dying for some real interaction between yohji and aya....
    Can't wait till next update.
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  • From ANON - MikaSamu on January 01, 2006
    I love this story, and especially this chapter. I think the description of the "Aya Syndrome" is perfectly on point, and the problem established of people "objectifying" Aya rather than getting to know the person inside makes for a fascinating and unique story. This chapter in particular I enjoyed because of the hints of hope -- of Aya coming, or attempting to come, out of the blanketing gray of depression. From the earlier chapters it appeared that perhaps Yohji and Aya were more truly in love than Yohji and Schuldig -- but that the two of them were not going to be able to get back together. Schuldig was also a bit irritating with his neediness and whining -- although that really simply makes for a richer story; no one is perfect, and loving someone including their imperfections is what life is about. "Hearing" a somewhat softer Schuldig in this chapter helps make Yohji's love for him more understandable, and gives hope for helping Aya to stand on his own. I hope Aya learns to care for himself, and that he ends up with someone special to care for him (hopeless romantic here). It seems Ken is firmly in the objectifying camp (and might find it easier to control his rages if apart from Aya), so I'm not at all comfortable with an ultimate Aya/Ken pairing . . . but there was that wandering thought of Aya's in this chapter. So many delightful possibilities in which this story can go. I eagerly wait for more.
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  • From Blythe on January 01, 2006
    My heart aches for Aya, unhealthy sister complex or not. I really enjoy seeing the more compassionate side of Schu and look forward to exploring more of the Schu/Yohji/Aya dynamics. Beautifully written, as always. I particularly like the line about thinking "nothing thoughts." I knew exactly what you meant, but neve could have articulated it so well. Thank you for another lovely chapter.
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  • From ANON - Hibiki-chan on December 27, 2005
    Your title is misleading! Heh.. I thought its about cooking but anyway, curiosity got better of me and here I am liking your story.
    Well done! Pls continue soon..
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  • From ANON - krimson on December 21, 2005
    Another great chapter! It's nice that Schu harbors some small affection for Aya, even if it is mostly on Yohji's behalf. I wonder what's going to happen when Schu picks up the physical abuse of Aya from Ken's mind....
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  • From ANON - ycpss on December 18, 2005
    love the story so far!! please more!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kayla on December 17, 2005
    Wow, I can't believe this only has 9 reviews so far. I have to say I was very skeptical of reading it in the begining and I had to force myself to read through the "everyone wants aya" or "everyone admires aya blah blah blah" things. But overall the writing really is great. I like the chracterations that you are showing, and I can see why you are doing what you are with the whole Aya thing. So I really hope you don't give up on this and that you do continue but I think this could turn out to be one of the better Weiss Kreuz fanfics out there.


    (god I'm hopeing though for a more possesive Schuldig heheheee I love when Schuldig is all Yohji's mine hehehee and of course Yohji being don't worry Schu, I'm yours, yes I'm a loser lol ^_^)
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  • From ANON - Misha Chaos on December 16, 2005
    This story is great! I love Schu and I like him with Yohji. I hope to see more soon!
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  • From jukeboxcsi on December 16, 2005
    This is really great so far! It's well written and easy to feel the emotions as well as visualize the scene. Looking forward to the updates and where you take this. Sounds like almost everyone's had a piece of Aya. The Quatre & Nagi incident with Aya that Schu hinted at sounds kind of non-conish maybe - I'll be as interested as Yohji to hear the details on what went down. I also hope this turns into a threesome with Schu/Yohji/Aya. I'd love to see Schu work with Yohji to heal a broken Aya.
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  • From Blythe on December 16, 2005
    Just finished chapter 4 and it is, as expected, amazing. Your desciptors are so vivid that I could see the scene in my mind and feel the turmoil of each character. This really is spectacular and I am looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Bee on December 16, 2005
    I'm really, really enjoying this fic. I love the Schu/Yohji pairing and you write their characters just so, so well. I hope you continue soon!
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