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Reviews for Shades of Mystification

By : Hellagoddess
  • From ANON - SpiritualBob on July 21, 2008
    That made me cry!
    This is so good! Update soon!
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  • From kyuhyun4evr on July 21, 2008
    ouch! your inner muse wounds me with this chapter. i cant wait to see what happens with this new arc. poor L!
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  • From animekid on July 21, 2008
    man this story....hahahahah

    I need to read it again; it's so good! I was laughing my butt off at the jealous L as well as the bitch fighting....the fighting! Oh man Raito didn't know L could fight XD the look was priceless.....

    and the fact that you put teru in this story...again....hahahahah

    I haven't read it in so long due to work :( and now I have to print out chapters and read them ARG!

    keep up this wonderful story; I want to see more catty fighting
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  • From RiamtheWanderer on July 21, 2008
    Holy crap. This was such an emotional chapter. Poor L and stupid Light. I am now hanging on the edge of my seat waiting for more, happier chapters. This one was great and added more drama, but I still like the happier moments. Don't ever stop, this is one kick ass story.
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  • From PlantangelJchan on July 21, 2008
    Rawr I think L needs to corner Near and kick the living shit out of him. Little albino bastard needs to feel the wrath of angry L! Well on a lighter note I wish to thank you again for writing this because I have discovered something whitch I very much thought I lost. I've begun painting again. I bought several canvases from the store and just started painting up a storm and I used the candy bracelet idea to help me with my sugar cravings too so yeah great idea on that it really does work. I hope those two can make up soon because they're much stronger when they're together. Well keep up the good work and I must say I will miss this fic when it's over, but I love it!

    -L
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  • From ANON - yuneek on July 21, 2008
    D: N...NOOOOO!!! THEY WERE DOING SO WELL! I hope Near ends up dead by the end of SoM... God I'm just so crushed...... I'll try to leave a better review when I can think straight :(
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  • From Evermist on July 21, 2008
    Nygaaaa!!! *punches Near in the gut* Ass-face! *slaps Raito* Pussy! Oh, man. The story can't be coming to an end already! It's too good!

    ...As corny as it sounds, it really feels like it was just yesterday that I happened to click into this story, and now we've hit the last arc. It's been really good.
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  • From ANON - Fouloldron on July 21, 2008
    Thanks for the update!
    I suppose it's the accepting country I live in but the idea of such a thing is madness. I think L and Light should run away to NZ you've always been a sensible nation. The first to give women the vote, peaceful and generally good all round. Australia is fairly like that to, or at least WA is, the only place you might get that sort of stuff is a small country/mining town and there the police would lock up the persecutors because of vilification laws.
    Very good but sad chapter.
    Ronnie.
    p.s. I hope your granny is getting better.
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  • From Roxas13 on July 21, 2008
    that made me cry. T___T so cruel... plz... bring them back together...
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  • From ANON - Lishawt on July 21, 2008
    ..I have never been so tempted to kick Raito so hard before. He cant do that to L!

    rawr. *kicks*
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2008
    Update please, I really like your story!
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  • From ANON - MiaoShou on July 17, 2008
    lol, Raito is an angel, judging the deeds of men? I hope not... not Kira, anyway! XD It seems he's drifted totally into love with L now, he seems to have no more doubts about it and he's actually being extraordinarily nice and sweet! Lucky L - shame about the driving thing, though, I guess this L doesn't have the same skill set he does in the manga. Looking forward to the next one :)
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  • From Duomi on July 13, 2008
    *started reading this half an hour before work while wolfing down food* Omg-- I shouldn't read this while eating!!! I read the part where the keys sailed past a blandly staring L while I was drinking, and nearly choked myself laughing!

    "He gnawed on his thumb, wide eyes sweeping over the facts before flicking up to study the creature itself, occasionally for half-hour stretches that had Raito shifting and wishing he’d worn sneakers. He seemed incredibly fascinated."

    I can so picture that being L's reaction to a zoo!!! Him just staring in total absorption at some random zoo animal that stares just as passively back. My mental image was L crouched down in front of an Orangutan with it mimicking his pose. Drawing that would actually make me do a background! Hmmm... Er, no, I need to finish reading and work!

    I'm guessing the Kira ref is the "judge the deeds of men" bit? Did L do bad things in the past in this he feels he needs forgiveness/ judgment for? *very curious* Or maybe just because of L's generally freaky nature... or just that since having Raito, L's started getting out more, living, which could be seen as Raito being a message from a deity to change.

    The fact that L has a driver's license if he's that bad is terrifying! I feel much empathy for the poor driving instructor. Maybe L just needs to design a car that makes use of buttons instead of pedals, so he wouldn't need to un-crouch. Alas, his genius goes to solving crime (in canon) or painting (here), not to making genius machines like Watari.

    Anyway, enjoyed the filler, but am looking forward to the next arc!
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  • From dumbass1215 on July 13, 2008
    Your story is awesome. I cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - moosemix on July 12, 2008
    that last chapter made me laugh. L & Raito are so cute together.
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