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Reviews for Shades of Mystification

By : Hellagoddess
  • From ANON - Shishio on June 10, 2008
    ^_^ Awww, the ending of chapter 19 and 18 made me fuzzy inside. Perfect WAFF. I have no clue what a car boot is but I figurd it was something that you put in your car to keep things safe, right..? I loved the scene when L was chasing the ducks, and it was kind of funny how Mikami quoted Shakespear while kidnapping Light.

    Um, about your grandmother's sugar level. If she eats something salty it should go down, like Saltine Crackers. If that's not working then I suggest you get some Chloroform for yourself, knock her out, and take her to the hospital because then you have a major problem on your hands. -I would have suggested knocking her out with force, but I figured since she was your grandmother you would rather not have to use such force...-
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  • From ANON - Unidentified reviewer # 1312 on June 05, 2008
    I hope you grandmother gets better, mines in the hospital as well (getting better as time goes on...)
    My loves with ya, doll, as is my hope and all that jazz... (dont mind the sentiments... very late at night...)
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  • From ANON - T on June 05, 2008
    Ack! I meant outrageously OOC.
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  • From ANON - T on June 05, 2008
    I'm afraid I don't have constructive criticism to give you. I just wanted to say that I freakin love it!!!! I haven't finished it yet since I found it today, but so far, I really love it and your portrayals of the characters therein. The best part about your story is that they're in character; I'm usually turned off towards outrageously IC characters. I mean, even when you said that sometimes Light was OOC, the situations that he was put in would naturally cause him to say and do things that he usually wouldn't. I'm going to keep on reading, and keep on enjoying!

    Oh! I don't know if anyone else mentioned this but....you watched the Yu-Gi-Oh Abridged Series didn't you? lol
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  • From ANON - sabriel75 on June 04, 2008
    Smiles. Well that rescue was the quickest ever in fanfiction history and yet, oddly enough, appropriately done. L should not have to worry about Raito!
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  • From RivenLiether on June 04, 2008
    Whew! That was a bit scary. lol. Looking forward very much to the next chapter, whenever you get around to writing and posting it. :D
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  • From ANON - yuneek on June 04, 2008
    I'm very sorry to hear about your grandma and hope all goes well for you and your family! Thank you for updating even in such a hard time!

    This chapter's probably my favorite so far. Especially when Light said that Ryuuzaki was going to maim whoever his kidnapper was :) What exactly did L do to those guys? I hope we'll get more info on that.

    Please take your time updating ~ family first!
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  • From Tulip32 on June 04, 2008
    O...M...G... You are such a genius. I can barely type this because I was so excited from your chapter. Wow! Talk about action-packed. Poor Raito. He is always being stalked, kidnapped, surrounded by stupid crazy people, or picked up by anonymous artists. XD. I love that L is always there to save him in the end, though. It's quite endearing.

    L didn't kill Mikami, did he? I wouldn't blame him, and could kind of see it after what Mikami did, but it would a bit extreme to kill him. Are you going to explain what happened while Raito was in the car boot? I want to know how L found him and whatnot.

    Wonderful chapter, once again, and I can't wait to see what happens in the next. I hope your Grandmother feels better. I'll pray for her. ^_^
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on June 03, 2008
    Awesome L to the rescue. I love how you incorporated Mikami into the plot line, this latest chapter seemed like a natural progression of the storyline. Thank you for posting this chapter, please update again when possible.
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on June 03, 2008
    Hooray! L to the rescue! XD *giggle* Stalker-boy got maimed. X3

    Family comes before fics, so I'll wait patiently until the next update. =3 I hope your grandma gets to feeling better! =D
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  • From PlantangelJchan on June 03, 2008
    Awwww sorry to hear about your grandmother I hope she gets better soon. This was a good chapter and the shower scene made me laugh and think of Ferris Bueller. Keep up the good work and take care hope everyhting turns out ok.

    -L
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  • From ANON - Kitsuna on June 03, 2008
    WAHAHAHA! Go L! I knew it was him, I clap. And I'm sorry to hear about your grandmother, sounds really scary...
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  • From Duomi on June 02, 2008
    First of all: I hope your grandmother does better...! That's a distressing and worrying problem. Don't feel pressure to write, take care of her and yourself...!

    Heheh, I'm guessing that L knew when Raito would awaken because he'd have been watching on the cameras...

    As for the rest-- my brain is overwhelmed by the awesomeness! I was panicking almost as much (exagerration!) as Raito, trying to figure out what the crash and scream were-- L having someone run their car into Teru's? My first thoughts had been, "I bet the bastard put the car on a ferry, and they're taking a boat somewhere!" or "Monster truck rally...?" but that didn't really make sense.

    A kidnapping! A rescue! All in one chapter. But L didnt get his lollipops... still, I liked this! It had me totally absorbed, and I was as baffled as Raito. I'm looking forward to reading the rest, whenever you can get it out. Best wishes for your grandmother!
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  • From IntHellsing on June 02, 2008
    This chapter is, of course, as brilliant as your chapters seem always to be... I just wanted to tell you that I fell out of bed laughing and nearly broke my laptop when I read the line "Does this rag smell like chloroform to you?". Absolutely. Fucking. Hilarious. XDD
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  • From Dotowe on June 02, 2008
    Hellagoddess!

    While I appreciate the advisery warning that there might not be an update for some time, take as long as neccessary, and more, to be with your Grandmother. Family always first, and I respect that you and your family are taking her well-being so seriously. My thoughts and prayers go with you, your grandmother, and the rest of your family.

    As for the update, loved it! You'd think he'd learned the first time; I wonder what, exactly, he meant by "maimed"? Is Mikami...dead?

    Looking forward to more, and please, no rush. Family first.

    Ohana,
    Gloria
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