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From Serpensangel on April 24, 2018
Absoutely love!

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From Vyper on July 27, 2015
This story is so good. I cried a few times. I know I have read this before but I love it. Thanks for writing this.
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From ANON - anon on September 14, 2014
Wow, I never leave reviews but felt compelled to let you know that I just finished reading your story and found it incredibly moving and well written. One of the best fics I've ever read. Thank you so much for you wonderful story! I hope to read much more from you in the future!
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From phoeyay on March 18, 2014
This review will probably tell you more about me than it does about yourself or your writing, as I am mainly going to focus on how it affected me.

The reason I'm doing it like that is, honestly, there is no question in my mind that this is a masterpiece. I can honestly say I agree with every good review this story has gotten. It took me quite a long time to read it because I was intimidated by the length.. and now (heh) I'm intimidated by the quality!

This story had a really weird effect on me. I am (as you will see from my writing on this site) a big fan of pure smut. I don't dislike a story with a plot, but it tends to get me bored pretty fast.

This one kept me riveted.

The initial lack of porn did not bother me one bit, and I was ensnared in your complex and well-crafted plots quite easily.

So, there's that.

Then there's another thing� it kind of felt like the story became a different story right around Chapter 34 (Separation). Not worse or better, just different. Mainly I just found it inexplicably depressing. I think this is the part where I reveal more about myself than about your fic through my review, because I would say a lot of what I love about Kuroshitsuji is the sense of intrigue, mystique, and danger that pervades it. That atmosphere was matched perfectly in your story up until those last few chapters.

That last bit though - even after Sebby returns - ugh, I don't want to sound critical because you are millions of miles above my level in terms of your writing skill� but it kind of felt to me like a Lifetime movie. It seemed like the tone and the focus of the story changed so much that, while the characters were recognizable and it was arguably much more grounded in reality and much more honest than the anime or manga will probably ever be� because of that very fact� it was also kind of a big downer.

And yes, I get that people die, life doesn't go on forever, strong relationships and spiritual awareness are important, family is important, and to really have a well-rounded story it's not a good idea to ignore those facts. It just� for me personally, I found it much too heavy-handed.

Please don't let my slight criticism overshadow my overall message that this is an A.Maze.Ing. story that is like Mt. Everest next to my little rock outcroppings of PWP, and I am very grateful that you decided to share it with all of us!

Thank you for hearing me out, and thank you again for posting this!
xoxo phoeyay
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From Vyper on March 15, 2014
Your story made me cry. It is beautiful.
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From ANON - marajade179 on October 18, 2013
That was an amazing story. Thank-you for writing it and shariing it with the rest of us.
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From ANON - little_alice on September 02, 2013
Your story really moved me. I would range from a pathetic mess of tears and a bound up ball of mushy joy. The world you created for this fanfic is just pure amazing! How it closely follows Yana Toboso's and history... it really show just how dedicated you are to your art! I truly haven't ever been so hooked on a fanfic (heck even published writings) like I was on yours.
Please, please, please, PLEASE keep writing.

Thank you so much for your gift!
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From Silentivy on August 23, 2013
Hello! My pen name is Silentivy, and I have been a patron of this site for several years now. I am a big fan of Kuroshitsuji and just wanted to let you know that your plot is the best fic I have read in this fandom so far. I do not cry often at character deaths and harrowing plot twists, such as Ciel's death and the two fiascoes in that nether-worlds, but your story had me in tears. Your skill in weaving a story that is not only believable, but also pulls one to become emotionally invested in said story is amazing. I hope everyone else that has read it enjoyed as much as I did! (3
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From ANON - cassandra phoenix on July 11, 2013
okay, so I read -- mainlined it, really -- this story all the way to the end before I reviewed any of it to see if it would collapse at the finish, but IT DIDN'T. this was *amazing*, and after wading through so much dross, simply heaven to read. you are a very good writer and your plot held together wonderfully and all the right emotional chords were struck (I cried at least 4 times near the end.) I love how you rendered Ciel's imperiousness as a young adolescent exploring his sexuality with Sebastian, and the way Sebastian comes to love Ciel. I really adored Lizzie in this, and how gracious she is about Ciel and Sebastian...I could go on and on, suffice it to say this was worth every minute of time I spent reading it. thank you so much for writing and posting this.
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From roguebitch on February 02, 2013
This is an astounding, exquisite piece of writing -- I am so glad I found it after wading through all the other fic! Your attention to the detail of the time period was wonderful and the characterization spot-on. The portrayal of the tension in Sebastian and Ciel's relationship was masterfully balanced. Thank you for writing this and posting it. It was truly a pleasure to read.
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From ANON - Mary on November 24, 2012
I read this story in one sitting. I am wiping away tears as I write this review. You have fashioned interesting, 3-dimensional original characters and developed the characters from the manga into logical and believable future selves. It was a pleasure to read writing free of the typos and incorrect vocabulary usage that mar so many otherwise decent stories. Most of all, I loved your Sebastian. I believe that he is not as utterly ruthless and unfeeling as many believe him to be. Throughout the manga and anime version, it was obvious to me that some of his actions were not required to fulfill his contract with Ceil, and some probably had a negative effect on the ultimate "tastiness" of Ceil's soul. He covered Ceil's eyes so he would not see his Aunt Ann's body lying in the alley after she was killed by Grell. At the end of the anime, (Season 1), he pulls the little blue flower ring from the water and gives it to Ceil as they travel to the demon island. When he is about to consume Ceil, he gently caresses his face one last time. I was so hoping that he would have a sudden epiphany at the last minute. I was disappointed to hear about the continuation in Season 2. I haven't watched it and I don't think I care to. Instead, I will consider your story as the way things ended. Ceil is happy, Sebastian is happy, and I am happy. Now if only I had a handsome butler to serve me tea and sweets to celebrate....
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From ANON - afrieal on August 28, 2012
I loved this piece. i spent two days reading this and alternately laughed and cried at this wonderful world you created from the manga and anime. I thank you for sharing it and i hope to read more of your works when i've totally recovered from this one.

Afrieal
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From CuratioLethe on November 22, 2011
This was incredible. I absolutely could not tear myself away from this story from the moment I clicked on it two days ago. You have done something wonderful for this fandom, my good person. Emotions were portrayed in such a way, the story was written so eloquently, and there was never a shortness in plot. I was hooked, and I'm absolutely raving! I don't believe anyone could have portrayed such a wonderful escalation into Ciel's life with such equisite words and detail, while holding so true to the characters and the cannon, as you have done here. This is only the second Kuroshitsuji fanfiction I've read, and it is already the best one I will probably ever read. I dearly want to thank you for sharing such wonderful story with the rest of the world, as well as my self. This is definitly the mark of a wonderful author, who has an incredible amount of potential. I will also be sharing this masterpiece with fellow online friends who love this fandom as dearly as I.
Thank you, once again, for such a gem.
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From sesssbewitchinbabe on November 16, 2011
Very well done. I enjoyed this story immensely. It was nicely written and I never wanted it to stop. You should write professionally. I hope to enjoy future stories from you.
SesssBewitchingBabe
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From naturechild02 on November 16, 2011
Wow, I can't believe someone left you a review threatening to get you kicked off the site just because they don't like the story. How childish and just plain stupid. I enjoyed your story. The detail was rich and the characters believable and true to the anime. I did think the chapters were a bit lengthy and some of the building and dress detail did seem a bit too much but too much is better than not enough, to me anyway. This was a breath of fresh air from most of the fluff and filth up here (which I am admittedly a part of!) and I hope after a bit you will write something new.
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