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Reviews for Shades of Time

By : vbruce
  • From BishiMistress on July 07, 2008
    ha! I figured out how to avoid the dreaded "cannot post" error! If I wait until the time officially switches over to the next day, I'm good! NIce chapter. Frightfully intriguing and not quite the way I start off my fantasies, but hey, be open-minded I say. Besides, she seems to heal rather quickly, so who knows.... awesome story and awesome chapter. *plants it and waits for more*
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  • From BishiMistress on July 07, 2008
    wow. Xan, tell us how you really feel. Can't say I wouldn't whine if I'd lost Kai >.< Though, I prolly wouldn't have given him up in such a shitty way.
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  • From zetsuai2005 on June 28, 2008
    Oh, no!! Now I see where Rei got all her experience in fighting all those 'things' on earth. Not exactly Shi or Tenpou's preferred means of getting naked, but maybe his behaviour in this crisis will convince her that his attitude toward her has sincerely changed. Very imaginative chapter, well written. Too short--more please!
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  • From Tazzy on June 27, 2008
    *Gently hugs Shi before offering warm bath and chocolate* Poor girl.
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  • From zetsuai2005 on June 26, 2008
    That was a sweet scene between Hakkai and Rei. I hope she lives long enough to be waiting for him when the ikkou comes back through. Maybe Xan should just go through with her threat on general principle, you know, to avoid trouble later on. I love your descriptions and attention to detail. Well done! Can't wait until Hakkai and Rei have a chance to spend some intimate time together; that is, if it happened in heaven, too.
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  • From Tazzy on June 25, 2008
    *cackles8 Go Xan!!!! Give Kanan what she deserves.

    And very nice to see Koumyu as well.

    *coos* Rei and Hakkai together are simply adorable.
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  • From zetsuai2005 on June 09, 2008
    I love the easy way the two commanders -- Tenpou and Shine -- can speak of personal affairs with their seconds. Though they may have known each other for hundreds (thousands?) of years, these seconds are newly discovering their attraction to each other. Of course he's fabulous! I hope the commanders can move on to a more, uh, intimate understanding of each other, too. Time and events are repeating themselves, and I hope Shine comes to a very good understanding of what the 'big deal' is about sex! Goku seems like he is about to come upon a remembrance that will rock the little ikkou off their socks. Excellent chapter, great setup for action to come.
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  • From Tazzy on June 05, 2008
    *coos* Love the interaction between Tenpou and Kenren and then Shi and Thiel. *giggles* Especially Shi living vicariously through her second....
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  • From zetsuai2005 on May 23, 2008
    Gojyo, Hakkai and Goku are all learning some very interesting things through these conversations. Here and there feelings about their interconnectedness with Rei are trying to push through. Goku seems the closest to having a flashback to Heaven and the inter-relationships there in the past. This is really a great story, well planned out as well as executed. I have no clue what is coming next (in the way of revelations) and am so hooked. Excellent work.
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  • From Tazzy on May 23, 2008
    More character development and more fun for Gojya. *snickers* Love the interaction between everyone and the little conversation between Xan and Gojya.
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  • From zetsuai2005 on May 18, 2008
    Well, a lot of things are up to Shi as well. I can't imagine how Tenpou is going to approach the subject, but he must have some backbone to be a Field-Marshall. This may be his most important battle yet. I'm sure you'll come up with something brilliant! Don't worry about the short chapters--we're hanging on your every word--and you know how to say a lot with a little. Suspense! Well-written, as always.
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  • From Tazzy on May 17, 2008
    *cackles* Poor Tenpou. I really should feel sorry for him, but as he realized, this was a disaster of his own making. Good luck with the chase, Field Marshal. It's gonna be a *LONG* one....
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  • From zetsuai2005 on May 05, 2008
    Never let it be said that women aren't willing to bend over backward for Kenren! I wonder what Tenpou is thinking as he stands in the tree line looking at Shine and the boys. The idea of fire armour is creative and cool! Hakkai now has no more excuses to committing. This use of fire is similar to her lightning touch in Heaven. Great writing! Short chapters can be exciting, too! Things are really coming to a head, but I'll be sad to see it all end (new chapters, that is!) Can't wait for more!
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  • From BishiMistress on May 04, 2008
    possessive Hakkai is a hot thought. So is fire armor. He DID say he wanted indestructable. Boys should be careful what they wish for ;) Very nice chapter.
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  • From Tazzy on May 04, 2008
    *cackles* COngradulations Hakkai, you've finally found the woman of your dreams....
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